AVARAA'S PROFILE

@Cashmere: Will consider! The character is actually based on Fetty Wap who to me appeared to just have a secondary white eye, tho on further inspection what gives it away is how it's a little squinted compared to the other. I'll experiment with things! Thanks for the heads up!

I generally feel like the perfect game length is about 6-8 hours max, maybe an hour per "level" or "dungeon?" If a game is too long I find myself losing interest about halfway through--I'm a busy person so I feel guilty if I log too much time into a game! Keep it simple!

My name is Amber and I posted the demo for my first RPGMaker game Parallels a while back. I'm currently working on the next major update for it, and I'm planning on snooping around the forums here a bit to learn some more about RPGMaker/gamemaking in general, and maybe collaborate with others on projects in the future.

I am an animation student and I have taken classes on game development before (though that class focused on teaching us how to create games in GameMaker). I also have a history of writing music, but I prefer working on visual arts and storytelling.

Looking forward to participating in the community!

This was a very fair and in-depth review and I appreciate the time you've taken to write it up! A lot of things mentioned are good points that I've definitely logged into my "to work on" list for upcoming updates. The battle system criticisms I definitely appreciate because the reality of it is that I am pretty clueless on how to handle that section of the game entirely, so I now have a few ideas on what I can do to spice things up a little bit!

In regards to the writing, I think a lot of fair points were made. I am an animation student and as such my brain processes stories more in a linear fashion (like in a film or a novel), but writing for a game feels a LOT different. I think I will definitely be incorporating more into the dialogues Ana gives when investigating items, perhaps some more things to do before the Circus transition, etc. Because I want the writing, the story and the character development in this game to be the strongest point, being aware of flaws or improvements to be made in this section of the game is incredibly important to me, so I really appreciate your honesty in this department.

Thanks again for the honest review, I will be taking everything into very serious consideration and I hope that in later versions you'll see improvements in these points!

author=Zoeex
The game is lovely but sadly I got stuck. I can't find any one else to fight to get the last ticket :/

Hi Zoeex, here's a list of all of the people you can fight for a ticket:

FIRST SCREEN:
- The shadow in the second bathroom line
- The woman to the right by the shopkeeper stalls

SECOND SCREEN:
- The man in front of the funhouse to the right
- The jumping girl in big crowd
- The woman to the far left of the screen by the tent

In the next update, I intend to make it a little clearer somehow, primarily with the girl in the crowd, as she's the one most ppl have a problem with.

Hope you enjoy the rest of the game!