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author=Dozen
Fifth iterationof what I mixed from a theme of an old game in Audacity. Which involves more rape than anyone should be confortable with, so I don't feel particularly guilty. The original fit Noriko as she stands somewhat, but I felt some enchancing was in order. Dl the file, Mediafire plays it icky.
Sadly, I could only listen to it in Mediafire, as neither WMP nor Media Monkey seems to be able to play the downloaded file.
author=Dozen
The fading in is supposed to symbolize as you often walk by as Noriko is busy with something else, the violin solo is self explanatory, while the heightening bit is a symbolic story premise-driven 'reward' of sorts for people who read the whole dialogue instead of skipping through the game.(I've made a variety of versions where it shows up twice at various points in the theme, either gradually or as a surprise scare, as well as a version without the violin solo in case you find it too cheesy.)
Quite nice indeed. I appreciate the thought you put into this. The more I listen to it, the more I like it. The only thing I might change would be to lower the volume on the hand-clap sound, as it seems a bit too far forward in the mix. Could be a Mediafire thing, though, I suppose.
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While I cannot take specific credit for doing something I would have done regardless, I would not dare insult the Overseer by refusing such a benevolent gift as this:
There is one thing that continues to bother me about Noriko: she has no music of her own. If you have any expertise in choosing such things, I would make that my humble request to the Overseer. Otherwise, I shall file this token under "H" for "Toy" until I come up with some other idea.
author=Dozen
To further encourage your commendable behavior, I've had an oddball idea. All the creators mentioned above are gifted a favor from me. Unskilled as I am, I will gladly and slavishly perform whatever task which doesn't require expertise, or I happen to be good at.
There is one thing that continues to bother me about Noriko: she has no music of her own. If you have any expertise in choosing such things, I would make that my humble request to the Overseer. Otherwise, I shall file this token under "H" for "Toy" until I come up with some other idea.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Marrend
Is it just me, or do those glasses look too small on her?
*Edit: That's really the only thing that jumps out at me. Even then, I'm mostly sure Tsubasa uses a very similar combination of eyes/glasses. Which makes this observation seem, I dunno. Unimportant?
Yes, yes, and no. The problem is that the medium-build-girl file only has the one model of eyeglasses in that layer.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Marrend
I'd like to clear up another discrepancy with what I have in my notes with what's available here.
ID 64 = (Reserved for dewelar)
ID 64 = Hamaguchi Takako {dewelar, unpublished}
Is this a legit change? This is more directed to dewlar than to Dozen. Because, you know, it's his character.
I have no problems with this change. I just didn't feel right attaching the information, since right now Takako's file consists of two stories and a borrowed tachie set, and hasn't been touched in a couple months.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Dozen
Yok- TRIAD! You lazy, hick bastard!:D Everyone stop, we're throwing a party!
:)
Noriko: Can't decide who to slap
Well, that's only because you had the good sense not to invite Iwao.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Marrend
the space by the left side of the neck looks like there should be something there.
Hmmm...hadn't noticed that before, since I use a dark background on my browser, but yes, that does make her look a bit pencil-necked.
author=Marrend
*Edit: I don't really think there's that many colors going on, here.
*nods* That wasn't phrased well. It's the clash that bothered me more than the actual number of colors.
author=Muteauthor=dewelarIt's very easy to change the color, but it does require some testing to see which color goes with the others well. Hmm... how about this?
If it were me, I would change the eye color (since I like the hair a lot), but I also know that's the hardest thing to change of the lot.
Much better. I don't personally care for red eyes, but they definitely suit the palette you've got going on more than that washed-out teal.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
I like this tachie for the most part. The one comment I'd make is that I think you've got too many colors going on. The yellow/purple/teal thing reminds me of Mardi Gras, but they're against that chestnut-colored hair, which throws it off. If it were me, I would change the eye color (since I like the hair a lot), but I also know that's the hardest thing to change of the lot.
Edit: I'm not fond of that Dozen tachie either. I've never been a big fan of huge moe-type eyes.
Edit: I'm not fond of that Dozen tachie either. I've never been a big fan of huge moe-type eyes.
Content creation (technical)
Page update: I went ahead and added Kotone to the list at #70. Hopefully we'll see some updates from BasedMG, as she's a promising character.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=dewelar
It might make certain sequences awkward to read, IYKWIM.
I was hoping that setting the characters gender to "male" would have taken care of that. So if we're on a date, <player> will refer to him as "her" and "she"?
I don't think so. I haven't found the post yet, but I seem to recall that there were a few random places where this wasn't working right. Hopefully Dozen will pop in with more functional memory circuits than mine.













