SAMJI'S PROFILE

Another crash while fighting the bandits.
It said "RGSS3 has stopped working."
Then it was forced shut down.
I restarted the game. It didn't happen again, just like the last few times.

author=once you get further into the game, let me know your thoughts on how I executed the plot. Even if it's bad XD

Well, I'm kind of stuck outside of Ravier's mansion, unable to find a key or some other ways to get in. Is there a way to turn off the data sound whenever someone speaks?

author=this game has substantially more dialogue and I can easily say you'll be spending at least 50% of your time reading dialogue.

What I mean is that, in RPGs, words are like poison at times, use them carefully. Do try to avoid a 20 min information dump in the beginning. You'll put your players to sleep. If it were a commercial game, you'll lose players in the first 5 minutes for sure. Paying customers are pickier and more demanding. But you're OK here since it's a free game. Don't worry. You won't be judged as harshly.

Try not to hop from scene to scene so frequently, though. It's not just confusing, it gets annoying, too. I understand you are trying to tell 3 or 4 sides of the story at the same time. Sometimes you just have to pick and choose what's more important, and find a better way to do it.

That's what I have so far, since I'm stuck.
I don't want to give viewers impressions that I don't like this game. I wouldn't bother with it if I didn't. Your game seems to have a nice story backbone(which is what a lot of games are lacking), and the mapping is nice, too. (Are those Lunarea's tilesets? They look nice.) If you aren't sure about the best ways to execute your plots. I'd say, pay attention to how others implement their ideas in their stories. Play GOOD games. It's worth paying for commercial games from time to time. If you don't have the money, at least play their DEMOs.

Hm...lengthy fights.
You got bosses and enemies that heal to full almost every turn. Not cool.

The bird in the swamp, the single samurai, and the golden defender could use some adjustments. These are not difficult or complicated, but they keep healing, the fights were never-ending and quickly became irritating. It is also unreasonable for an enemy to heal AND buff AND attack all in one turn, especially when you have 4 or 5 enemies that can all potentially do that. There's got to be a better way to make your battles more challenging.

Other than the battles, I think the story has a lot of potential, and it has a nice flavor to it. Be sure to make it more complete. Love the character art. They are a bit too small. If I were you, I would make them bigger and lower their position. You can either shrink the dialogue box or cut them off from the waist to make room. It'll be much prettier visually.

I have reached the mine, but I can't seem to be able to find the entrance.
After talking to the fairy, I entered a room with chests and no monsters. There's also no doorways inside said room. Did you forget to put the entrance somewhere?

I enjoyed the battles, though I do feel there are too many monsters and they are too crowded. Maybe you don't want to put them too close to each other. Perhaps make the paths wider. The paths are just not wide enough for all the monsters and me. Forcing players to engage in battles totally undermines the purpose of having visible monsters. Monsters are pretty. Are they RTP?

Mapping looks nice, but the story is pretty weak. It needs a bit more work. Music sounds so noisy, but it could be just me.
Love the battle animation. Is that MV RTP too? Or did you draw them? Cute.

Overall, it's a fun game. Good work.

ps. The title screen lags big time for some reason.

It's a really lovely game. Maps are nice, too.
Here's a few suggestions that, hopefully, you might find useful.
As others have mentioned, you need to correct a lot of writing errors. The story is the major part of an RPG, not battles. Improving your English will make it easier for players to get into your story. Speaking of which, it does seem your story is going somewhere interesting. During the first hour or two, though, I had no clue what I was doing and why I had to go to the other City. Perhaps you would want to strengthen that part and give your journey a more meaningful purpose. It might also be better to avoid repeated backtracking when you design your maps. It's an issue with having a "house". It feels like once one owns a house, he is always obligated to return to it. You can, however, always give the "quick jump" option.
Just a few things that irks me. Hope they can help. It's solid work. Got a nice beginning. Keep up with good work.
Oh, yeah. I never saw the rat in the basement. ...???
And the 30 Lys flower quest can not be completed, right?