SHAYOKO'S PROFILE

hmm...difficult to answer without being bias
the biggest thing i play rpg games for is the characters and plot.
so between battles i don't care for and to keep it simple the negative aspect of the world being overwhelming...this had me in a bad-okay mood most of the time.
That aside it had great mapping and good grammar :3 he whole infused thing was a bit ify because the player wasn't given a reason to decide if he should be captured or left alone

Ayer-most because he is pretty much the only one in the entire world who will do the right thing even if everyone's against him.

The commander-least because she is a doll...she just obeys orders. doesn't care about right and wrong despite this motivation to protect civilians which feels like a feel considering her morals are empty. theres no defending a bad king like him let alone the concept of kings in general which aren't needed.
at least in Amalia(red haired girl) she has potential to improve.

I am at a bit of a loss when it comes to mias reason for traveling to the capitol (sorry bad with names) to become a knight. i believe she said it was good money but i cant see a reason at her village why she would want it. they aren't exactly in poverty.
and she was able to do something in her home town.perhaps she just wanted to train to protect it? however she could of just trained around her village in that case.

she seems to have some romantic feelings for Aeyr but is mature enough to not make it obvious or let that make her a unpleasant character to follow(for the player).
she is morally correct and would probably defend people in danger but i dont think she has the courage to go up against the royal army.
i am not sure if she would abandon Ayer to his fate or help him if they were the enemy.

Well...he is awesome! i hope he kills all the soldiers,paladins and king to turn the story around in a more pleasant experience.
the king is at the very least mandatory i would rather have the commander as ruler at least she does things herself (off screen)
there isn't much to say about Ayer he is a hero. regardless of how bad things get he wont sacrifice good people to save himself. this could be his downfall.

i don't play rpgs for battles.but i think you did a good job with this. maybe i am bad at the game but anyone else think the 4v1 battles in the game are too much?
with all single attacks its a major pain.
you can afford equipment!? i relied on healing potions sniff ;( not enough money need heals sniff

i would never say change a story only what i would like to see.as the developer its your world and people need t respect that.
personally i don't like over like dark stuff.no torture or rape scenes.
i can't stand slavery either but if it was done in a good way that served purpose rather then just being depressing it could be acceptable.

but..i am hoping to see atonement for the red head...she crossed the line and death is the only way to pay off what she did at the end of the demo...
forgot to add letting the player know about switching characters in battle

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