WRAPTORMAN1955'S PROFILE

author=cammenball

author=Deckiller
I accepted this for the following reasons:

- You are making improvements based on the older "Pt. 1" game page.
- Your mapping has been improving.
- It's clear that you are expanding the game, which means there will be lots of opportunity for feedback.

Based on the screenshots, however, I do see plenty of opportunity for improvement:

- The maps tend to be large and empty. Try making your rooms smaller and adding some details :D
- There are a few spelling and grammatical issues (e.g. "My gold filthy beger.").
- Please correct the title. It should be "The King's Quest: Complete" - not "The Kings Quest Complete". It would help to have a third-party player help you proofread the game for spelling and grammar - first impressions are always important :D

Keep up the good work and you'll continue to improve!

ok thanks but this is my first game so im doing as much as I can. The funnest part was making the beggar, cause if you say no he steals it