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Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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@triad:
Fair enough. I don't want to cause undue stress, here.

@Dozen:
I'm half thinking of putting in some Uchioniko sequences with Fran. Maybe it's me feeling "lolz", because the scene would be with Masako and Shoko. Can you imagine it? It would be like:

STORY X
PLACE = Hall A
ID = 10
SHOW LEFT
NEUTRAL
ID = 13
SHOW RIGHT
NEUTRAL
ID = 10
So, you have also been affected by these capers?
ID = 13
UNFRIENDLY
*Nods*
# "Yeah, my homework was stolen."
ID = 10
Have you heard of any other instances?
ID = 13
NEUTRAL
*Cocks head*
# "Well, my friend Izumi, was hit yesterday. The day before that, it was Ruri."
*Giggles*
# "Mayu went all ballistic when she found out she was hit this morning!"
ID = 10
UNFRIENDLY
I hope no-one was harmed in her rampage?
ID = 13
NEUTRAL
*Shakes head*
# "She's got detention for endangering other students."
ID = 10
I see. Well, thank you for your time.
ERASE LEFT
ID = 13
NEUTRAL
*Bows deeply*
# "You're welcome, senpai."
*Uncertain smile*
# "Watch out for that girl, <player>. She can read minds, I swear it!"
ERASE RIGHT
ID = 0
(That was... the weirdest conversation I ever saw in my life!)
...
(Wait a sec, could you even <b>call</b> that a conversation?)
@flowerthief that is actually as low as i could get it if you would like to try i could upload her psd for you.

@ marrend it wouldnt be stressful at all in fact i find messing with the tachie somewhat relaxing i am just currently working 2 full time jobs right so my time is limited and i would want to take my time and make it right. after i hear back from dozen on seira i will probably say goodbye
@Marrend This event is comedic gold in itself. The player should talk/think more depending on what's going on exactly and act more like himself, but I can see this making me smile all day, had I encountered it in-game:)

On that, what IS he doing? Helping Masako? Overhearing? I can't tell...

And, for the love of gods, the hell is Masako's bonus on Sense Motive?
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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author=Dozen
@Marrend This event is comedic gold in itself. The player should talk/think more depending on what's going on exactly and act more like himself, but I can see this making me smile all day, had I encountered it in-game:)


I do try.

On that, what IS he doing? Helping Masako? Overhearing? I can't tell...


The exact context wasn't well defined. It was just, "Hey, I could do this!"

And, for the love of gods, the hell is Masako's bonus on Sense Motive?


Is "Yes" a valid answer?

author=triad2
it wouldnt be stressful at all in fact i find messing with the tachie somewhat relaxing i am just currently working 2 full time jobs right so my time is limited and i would want to take my time and make it right. after i hear back from dozen on seira i will probably say goodbye


I could be reading this wrong (It's happened before) but I wasn't talking about Yoko, or her tachie. I was actually talking about not stressing over that picture I posted earlier. Like I said, I could write the sequence a different way.
i was using the tachie as an example i have a really stressful job at night and working on the picture would help relax me before my next job but i would really want to take my time with it and do it right
You know, I bet that Mayu and Torako know each other. They both do a ton of Japanese sports. I'm going to go ahead and say that they were rivals when they were younger, if that's alright with you, Marrend. Maybe Mayu even used to get lessons from Torako's dad or older brothers, since he runs a dojo.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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I'm afraid the name "Torako" doesn't ring any bells. A minor character that I totally missed, I must suppose.
Nah, a character that I'm working on right now. Part of the "academy girls" trio.

She's the one in the center trying to convince the player to let them butt in on his karaoke time.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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Yeah, I saw Torako Koizumi listed at #17 when I was copy-pasting the character list onto the other site. I guess it didn't hit me until that moment.
I'm thinking of making these girls even more interactive than Junko. Meaning that there will be some answers to questions which aren't necessarily right or wrong, but nevertheless effect which events you get with them. I just hope I won't go to overboard doing so.

Though I may be starting to rethink this decision a little bit. I have a bunch of homework to do before Friday at 4:30PM, so I'm freaking out and procrastinating like crazy right now. We'll see what Saturday brings.
marrend i have a bit of free time now and i kind of need a stress reliever so if you still have that picture you wanted edited and if its not to much trouble can you upload it so i can take a shot at trying to make it work?
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
triad, I'll be uploading it in a moment, but I was making a few attempts of my own. Didn't succeed very well, though.

At some point, I was curious to see just how the picture would work if I left it alone. I wrote up a temporary story, and used it with "PLACE = None" as a backdrop. The game automatically centered the picture. With the black background that "PLACE = None" provided, it kinda looked like it was in "letterbox" format.


*Edit: triad, here. Show me what you can do!
marrend i don't know if this is good enough or if this is even what you wanted but here it is
ps thank you this really gave me time to sort myself

PPS
Yaaaaaaaa more nekochi charectors
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
triad, did you make a copy, and invert the copy, to make that? Interesting. I probably would not have thought of that! When things get back to a semblance of normalcy around here, I might try playing with that concept myself. For the moment, I'll use your example, though.
i started out cutting out pieces and fitting them in places that would match but that turned out to look really bad so i cut smaller pieces and that looked even worse so after a while i did exactly that and well thats the result i'm sure someone with better skills could do make my first idea work

I don't know, does that look any better? It seems a little less repetitive to me, but the changes I made may be too obvious.
By the way Dozen, do you still want me to look at Kyouki? If you do, can you please send me the files? I'd love to look at them now that I have time to do so.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
I appreciate your assistance, guys. Anyway, what do you guys make of this idea:



Yeah, it's an incomplete picture and I know it. However, I think I might be onto something with this.
they both look really good i will have a lot of free time starting next week i am wondering if i should work on yoko revisit maeda and make the changes i wanted to or start a totally new charector what do you guys think?