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Even when profound, it is a task to take you seriously. Good thing I know better and listen to people who sound like retards, because sometimes they aren't. I've made use of the procedure you mentioned before. Listen to him, Marrend, he knows what he's talking about.
I'm proud of my hick upbringing a lot of great people in history were considered hicks Da Vinci, Winston Churchill, Thomas Paine, Albert Einstein, just to name a few. And all of them were also big fans of the eureka moment
You keep using the word 'hick'. I'm not sure if there is an obscure usage of the word I'm not aware of or it doesn't mean what you think it means. Keep in mind, I'm not from the USA, the best I can do when I don't get a word is looking it up, and all meanings of 'hick' I can find are derogatory. What do you mean when you say it?
its similar to redneck: a person raised in small town with a lacking in formal education, the key difference between a redneck and a hick is a redneck never grew out of doing stupid stuff for entertainment. The lack in formal education could be due to dropping out, or as in my case just a breakdown of the quality of the school system. and yes because of the lack of education we are often seen as dumb or as retarded so it is indeed a derogatory remark in the eyes of some. And some get us confused with rednecks hillbillies and oakies.
I see. But then, why hold onto it? Discriminating people for lack of knowledge is bad, but you have access to knowledge now. You're on the internet. There's differnece between 'could not' and 'could not be bothered' I'm sure there are sites out there that pique your interest where you could learn proper English. It doesn't even have to be educational, you could learn from pretty much any written text as long as the writer does well enough. If you refuse to improve when you have a chance to, everyone has the right to persecute you for it. I can see why Einstein would not change; he had autism, he probably couldn't care less. That doesn't mean he shouldn't have.
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author=triad2
I find it's sometimes easier to work on two at the same time. Then it is only focusing on one. Marrend, it seems to me you need a "Eureka!" moment. You are thinking in circles and over analyzing everything about Fran. Step back and look at the whole picture. I'm sure the best solution will come to you.


I'm not sure if you're aware of this, but I do stuff on RMN that does not involve Heartache 101 - Sour Into Sweet? Saying that, I'm certainly looking for some form of epiphany when it comes to Fran. I usually find it in stream-of-consciousness thinking ("Idea dumps" if you will). Which was the style I was writing in with the last two posts I made here. More or less.

author=Dozen
Note to self: Pointing out mistakes of avoidant people will crush their confidence.

...

Note 2: Should think for a second so to realize the obvious. Also, learn to be nicer to others, Dozen. Not cool.


Somehow, I'm reminded of when you commented on my review of Joruri. Whatever. Let's just put that aside, and focus on the current situation.


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The initial focus for Fran seems to be this repeating dream. I have no wish to emulate what happens in Weird Dreams in Heartache 101 - Sour Into Sweet. So, it appears that I will have to come up with something else. Wait. A repeating dream? Prompt 18!? I mean, that's for something completely different, but I can use that idea in a different way. Probably.

The first time the player meets Fran, I imagine that she should come off as being bored/tired. She's done this millions of times (literally), and an end isn't in sight. She doesn't currently have a tachie to support those particular emotions, but that's not a huge issue. My query is, at what point would Fran realize that the player might be able to find a way out for her?

It seems plausible to me that Masako is already aware of Fran's existence before the game starts. It might be possible that she was dream-speaking with Fran, since, well, MYSTIC POWERS. To say that Fran asks Masako to be released from her torment at least once during their conversations would be a sure bet.

So, wait, is Masako ultimately responsible for getting the player involved with Fran? If so, why? Perhaps she sees something within the player than others cannot? Perhaps. She does, after all, have MYSTIC POWERS.

If I follow through with these ideas, the best way to go about this is to have the player make Masako's first SOUL/MIND check from her original story file. If that happens, Masako would sense that the player would have an empathic ear to Fran's plight. Or something like that!

Oh yeah. The case of Tsubasa and the missing homework. I'm not totally sure that's still going to happen.
why have masako drag the player into whatever is going on with fran when fran is perfectly capable of dragging the player into it. unless I'm mistaken you seem to have fran trapped in a dream loop or parallel universe if I was in that situation I would be trying to find a way out no matter the cost and the player could be having the dreams as a result of the efforts to escape. Then the player could turn to masako and tsubasa for help because they are the two smartest charectors in the game.

@dozen would you mind if we carried discussed this in pm from now on?
Marrend
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author=triad2
Why have Masako drag the player into whatever is going on with Fran when Fran is perfectly capable of dragging the player into it?

I have to think about this a bit. According to the theory that is presented in Matsumori Days, the boundary between realities can be accessed anywhere, but only if one has the power of an Arbiter. Those who are not Arbiters can still have access, but only at a very specific point: the Door of Possibilities. The boundary between realities has weakened, so perhaps those whose lives have been touched by Arbiters have limited access to said boundary. Which is to say that Masako has said access. Though, saying that, there has not been much contact from the "other world" to the "real world". In that respect, if Fran does cause weird dreams, that would be it's own anomaly.

author=triad2
@dozen would you mind if we carried discussed this in pm from now on?

From what I can tell, we're having a three-way discussion, which is not conducive to PMs. Unless you're talking about something else? In which case, please ignore this comment.
if the veil has weakened then couldn't a person who has the ability to attract strange things to them, as in the case of the player, be able to peek through the veil which would cause the dreams so instead of fran attracting the player he could be unconsciously attracting her.
Marrend
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I've always had the impression that strange things happen to the player character because of the people he gets involved with. The goings-on would happen without his presence, but the player (the person actually playing the game) doesn't see the happenings unless he/she/it/whatever choose a certain route (no pun intended). In this respect, whatever Fran is going through is going to happen, and indeed has happened several times, despite the presence of the player character.

Well, that's my going theory, anyway.
Why are so many of those people around him? My theory has been he is an unknowing magnet for chaos i'm not saying hes at fault for the strange things that happen to him and those around him just that he attracts people that have strange things happening to them if he wasn't there the strange things would still happen just that he is unknowingly pulling all of these people to him

for example if 3 random students (including nameless and faceless ones) were going to stay at a haunted house, if he isn't one of the three, the chances that one of them would be akari would be astronomical. but if he was one of the three i would say that one of the other two being akari has now gone up to almost a 75% chance
author=Marrend
I have to think about this a bit. According to the theory that is presented in Matsumori Days, the boundary between realities can be accessed anywhere, but only if one has the power of an Arbiter.

On a loosely related topic, what is the other reality called? I'm getting some really nice feed for future campaigns here.

Onto the point. My research have been a success. There is, in fact, a kind of ghost from the dreamworld who eats minds. Forgive me for a second while I grieve over realizing just how fucked up D&D is.


In hindsight, this thingy shoulda been a dead giveaway.

Thank you.

Now, the proper, Tabletop-wise reasonable explanation would be that Fran is stuck in the Region of Dreams, either by accidentally getting through a temporary tear in the interdimensional fabric or by being asleep for far too long, a la the Sleeping Beauty. Over time, her torment/boredom/wishes/will/whatever(Depending on the nature of the dream, you know better which one) have managed to take control over her Dreamscape, and her consciousness materialized as a ghost; a Dream Vestige, specifically.

Without getting into the really nerdy science of it, vestiges are phantasms; that is, imaginary... But they were imagined so hard, they can interact with reality, and can be binded to an individual(In this case, the Player) and/or summoned as a spirit. I recommend just binding her for the sake of originality. We don't want to steal from Fate/Stay Night.


I mean, just look at them! These guys would fuck us up!

So the Player binds Fran to himself(because Masako can't be expected to multiclass or waste a feat out of the blue, can she?;). While Masako scans the planes for the body, he takes care of our dreamspawn, fighting down the urge to to munch on someone's midterm. Finally, the Player shooves her back into her body. And it all makes sense now. Cheers!
marrend i had an eureka moment in both yoko's and fran's dilemma sometimes the best explanation is no explanation at all growing up there was a scifi show about a guy imprisoned on an island the last episode decided not to explain the weird things going on it just decided to make it weirder and let the fans come to their own explanations so if you are having such a hard time wrapping things in a nice little bow maybe it's not meant to
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I firmly believe the player character should have a certain amount of SOUL before he comes in contact with Fran. I could do this with a CONDITION = SOUL X, but I'm more inclined to having players succeed with Masako's first stat-check.

One question, though. Why should I care what exists in D&D? It seems pretty clear to me that I'm following my own rules. Also, wow, that was mean.
author=Marrend
One question, though. Why should I care what exists in D&D? It seems pretty clear to me that I'm following my own rules. Also, wow, that was mean.

Tell me about it. You wanted to drop the premise of Fran's stories, and then couldn't be bothered to tell you didn't actually want help when I offered, and just said what you did because DOZEN DOESN'T KNOW, YOU TELL HIM, and, now after I spent hours of my life to justify the single most ridiculous plot device I've ever seen so you don't have to start again from scratch, of which you knew about, or at least should have if you read anything I say, you tell me to fuck off, as you all of the sudden know better.
I don't know why do I bother with this rant! Might as well not say anything, I get shit on pretty much everywhere I go, and then they are suprised when I act like a clown until they notice I exist! I guess I shouldn't expect THEM when you, who can't open a goddanm door if you're afraid you'll disturb someone on the other side, can stomp over me! Shows how much I'm worth! Surely D&D sucks too much to lay it's dirty hands on your 100% original masterwork, and you must have had a terribly valid reason not to tell me that before I slaved away. I'm going to mind my own business until your highness decide I can offer some help you would not tell this boring lowlife to stick up his ass.
Marrend
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It was not my intention to create this level of hostility. For however much it's worth, I am sorry.
normally I try to stay out of squabbles between people and I really feel I should stay out of this one but I can see this developing into a very bad rift so here is some hick wisdom for both of you. You can take it or leave it.

@marrend just because you are following your own rules doesn't mean you can't draw from other works also i agree with you on having cleared masakos first stat check it would give him reason to seek her advice later on because you can still have high spirit and fail her stat check because your mind is too high.

@dozen marrend may still be helped by that even if on a subconscious level and even if not it may help someone else nothing you put your whole heart and effort into is a waste you may never see the results of the work but that doesn't mean they aren't there

having said all that i apologize to both of you for stepping into something that isn't any of my business and i will try to keep it from happening in the future.

Yoko is getting a little out of hand on how big of scale shes gotten i'm thinking i should split her into two versions clean mode version and non clean mode version
instead of clean mode path and non clean mode path what do you guys think?
author=triad2
@dozen marrend may still be helped by that even if on a subconscious level and even if not it may help someone else nothing you put your whole heart and effort into is a waste you may never see the results of the work but that doesn't mean they aren't there

having said all that i apologize to both of you for stepping into something that isn't any of my business and i will try to keep it from happening in the future.

Don't you apologize for telling what you believe is right again. You're missing the point, but I don't expect you to understand a madman's thought process. Thank you for helping me calm down.

author=Marrend
It was not my intention to create this level of hostility. For however much it's worth, I am sorry.

Of course it wasn't. Thank you for reminding my emotions you're a nice person so I can say what I actually want to say. It just...hurts, you know? It hurts so bad. I'm relying on other people to tell me how much I'm worth, and this made me feel so worthless. Please don't do this again. I'm sorry if I hurt you.
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The best recompense I can think of is to give Fran as much effort as I can muster. I'm not quite ready to make any changes yet, so...

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One of the main ideas of Matsumori Days is that all realities that can exist do so simultaneously. On that note, I should have been more receptive to Dozen. It is unfortunate that I realize this now, but, let's not dwell on that. Though, I'm kinda liking the whole "explain nothing" idea that triad2 brought to the table. At least, I think that's what he said? That's how I was reading him, anyway.

I'm definitely taking out the scene in Matsumori High. If nothing else, it messes with Masako's ending.

What's that line from Hamlet? "There is more to this world than what is in your philosophy, Horatio." Something like that? At any rate, I wanted Tsubasa to experience something supernatural. Something that expands her mind beyond the world of mortal Men. That's why I had the sequence at Matsumori High to begin with. That I'm taking it out means she's not going to have that experience. Is... that really such a bad thing, though? Probably not.
author=Marrend
Though, I'm kinda liking the whole "explain nothing" idea that triad2 brought to the table. At least, I think that's what he said? That's how I was reading him, anyway.

I'm not sure what he said either. And no explanation? I dunno about that. I definitely wouldn't let Masako get away with casting spells on me without running me through the basics at least. I know the Player is an idiot, but is he so much? And from the real-life player's standpoint, not knowing what's going on is annoying.