Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

Wow, Triad, those rips are very impressive! Bravo!:D My blobs feel a little bland in comparison:( Her hair creeps me out a little though. It looks like it cuts trough her NECK. Uncanny Valley material, that one part.

On another note, I've finished Maeda's story. By that too I'm impressed, but would you mind if I got my hands on some grammar issues and smacked it into shape before I'd upload it to RMN? You could, of course, have a look at my modified version before that happens.

author=triad2
here is the beta version more testing is needed but all criticism are welcome http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar

Let's trade beta-tests!

Well, I'm certainly not a fan Seira, or her type of story. Though, it seems to me that her outright abuse of the player could come forward more. Like, give the player a choice (bold intentional) between continuing to take her abuse, or throw her into the slammer. Choosing the former scenario will continue the story as you envisioned it (probably), while choosing the latter would lead to a "Seira locked!" scenario. However, I'm not sure if this whole "throw a juvenile into jail" is a viable story with the setting the game is supposed to have. It's a thought, anyway.


Anyway, I was beta-testing Fran along with Seira. I have yet to get Story 7, which has a PLACE = Bedroom line in it. It also has a CONDITION = Saturday line, so I'll be temporarily removing that to see if it works at all.

author=triad2
so you aren't having trouble with story 5? it maybe because i keep getting to day 3 before i can get that one part and as for seira she's a maydere though i was trying for a yandere but she got so overly violent that it seemed more like a death thing then just trying to hurt him that i just went back and decided to go maydere all the way

I haven't the slightest clue what a "yandere" or a "maydere" is. I only know what I've experienced. And what I've experienced were situations that I'd wish upon no one.

I think you mis-read me a bit. When I said "I only know what I've experienced." I meant to say that I only knew as much about the character as the experience of play that I had with the character. I didn't mean to come across saying that I had personal experience with such a person. That would certainly be a cause for social withdrawal, though...

Anyway, I never said I had problems with Story 5. Not error-probelms, or choice-issues. The probelms I was having, with the character as a whole, is that, I dunno, she seems to be able to get away with quite a bit of violence by threatening more violence on the player character. It never comes across <player>'s mind to give her a taste of her own medicine, or, the more honorible route, to talk to the authorities. There was a sequence I read (I didn't get this in-game) about being in front of a guidance counselor (or somebody like that), and having the choice to talk about the abuse she's done on him. This action obviously gets player on Seira's bad side (She has a good side?), and I'm not sure what the consequences of that action do to Seira. She's still in the game, as far as I can tell.

You can't get Story 5 for Fran? The way it works at current incarnation, you need to have been introduced to Masako and Tsubasa first.

Which brings me to the point of forgetting to say that Masako and a disabled Clean Mode are requirements for this character. There's always something, eh?

If you need time to sort out what you want to do with Seira, Yoko, or whoever else you could be working on, that's fine! Scrapping a character should be a my-computer-blew-up-and-I-lost-all-my-work kind of thing. If you merely lost inspiration, I can assure you, it'll come back bludgeoning you in the face.

Re-uploaded Fran. I fixed up a few things, and I managed to get the bedroom event. We're still demoing this character, so please note that as you play her out. Both Masako and Tsubasa need to be active content for certain events to function. Until further notice, they also need to be introduced for Fran's story, such as it is, to unfold.


*Edit: You might want to wait and see what others have to say about Seira. I, for one, don't not like the character, and that could be blinding me with bias.