Haha, a couple of typos already found orz

In any case, nice to see it up! I had some weird error when I tried to save, tho. Might be because it was greyed out (are there save points ...?), but didn't find the save file, apparantly.

I love it, but THAT BOX BIRD PUZZLE, is starting to get on my nerves, I'm terrible at puzzles.

Edit: Pom strikes again

Unfortunately not. It's progressed a lot, but I can see a lot of expansion being made.

So, having translated some parts, this game is looking to turn out just as magnificently as it started.

I'm really excited to see the full version coming up in the future.

Beautiful game.
There is nothing to say about the obvious grammar mistakes. It makes me chuckle, though! A very German translation indeed.

I really love the close attention to detail - the soundtrack is soothing and fits the situations perfectly. There are so many little animations - like taking that game out of your pocket. The "real" world is also, as nhubi pointed out, made deliberately different, colder and a little more isolated than the gaming world.
The different dialogue box skins, the whole interface as well as the color scheme contrast the two very nicely. The game seems like a game - even the tutorial notes are wonderful. And while the "story" present in the game is clichéd, you manage to give it a wondeful, beautiful vibe.
That is great work.

The only thing I find jarring are the ingame comments by our protagonist. I know it makes sense, since he is checking it out, but it seems out of place when you play there. But that's just me nagging.

I had a quick run-through of this again and I'm happy to discover that my memory of how much I enjoyed it isn't coloured by nostalgia. This game is still quite fun with a lot of potential. The grammar issues have been well commented so I won't make too much mention of them here other than to say they do take away from a great game experience and reduce it to just being a good one.

The interface you've included is great, not clunky or awkward at all, and there was a probability that it could be, but you've managed to integrate it pretty seamlessly. The music choices however do have to be a highlight for me, they are chosen with quite a bit of care and they really help to convey a mood or feeling within each sequence they are played. Even the opening one has that melancholic feeling of isolation that Josh feels from his father and in some ways from a lot of the people around him, hence the fascination with the game-world. The colour scheme you've chosen too aids in this, the sombre autumnal tones in the real world as opposed to the verdant green of the game world is a great visual indicator.

I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes when it is completed and hopefully with an editor to give your 'Germish' translation a more natural flow.

Where the full version?