ALICEMISAKI'S PROFILE

author=NTC3

author=AliceMisaki
Maybe for FlareBlitzed my game isnt boring :)
And just in case you forget.. immortal is completed game and red thread isnt a demo is an episode game so isnt "nice" compare one Demo to one completed and one game in ep :) Isnt nice come behind my game and talk about others game lol

The line between a "demo" and an "episode" is very thin on this website: more the case of whichever name developer prefers then anything else, really, and has no real relation to either length or quality. Watch FlareBlitzed video of Memoirs "Episode 1" for some conclusive proof. :) It is about as large as your demo. Meanwhile, Red Thread "episode 1" is slightly larger then "One Fate" demo (though it's thankfully a lot better.) Then there are obviously games with multiple-hour demos here too, though I can't name any horror ones right now, so I suppose they don't count.

Still, point taken. Let's end this discussion for now. We can talk more about your game, on its own, and relative to others, once my review of it is approved. :)

author=Dragnfly
I guess there are lots of Italian RM developers. Cool.

I played it. The English isn't great but at least I could understand what you were meaning. There's a non-English mistake when talking to the girls after making your first decision, where she has a "1" at the end of "walk". It's also funny how you can just walk right by them without talking to them LOL. It's funny to imagine that happening.

Make_it_MagiK already mentioned the tinting issue.

There's another issue after you go through the locked door. If you try to open the menu, the game locks up.

One English problem I need to mention- the man says "Don't steal nothing from my house!" This is called a double negative, where two negatives make it positive. So he's really saying "Do steal something from my house!", which is the opposite of what he means. It should be "Don't steal anything from my house!"

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For something funny, you can go back into the house after evading the man in the garden, go back through the kitchen again and he'll be back at his starting point in the garden, where the chase resumes. That man isn't very smart:)

The mapping has some problems, especially with the shadows and edges. Never trust RPG Maker's auto shadows. They aren't reliable.

It's an interesting game and the characters look nice. I think this is the first time I've seen a child character wearing black lipstick.

But the game certainly needs more polish. I suggest playing some other RM games and seeing what they do to get an idea of how to map better. I also recommend making a post on the forums to ask if somebody can look over your text to improve the English. Nobody should be mad about the bad English but since you decided to release the game in English you should also see if somebody can help you improve it.

Keep at it.

author=Liberty
The shelves are up too high. That is, since the RTP is 3/4 view you can see the width of the shelves. If they were positioned as they were, they'd be floating on the walls. Move them down one tile and they'll be fine, though.