BACONANDEGG'S PROFILE

author=AlexLuxemberg
I think you're trying to plagiarise this game: http://rpgmaker.net/games/5475

This is like saying every fighting game ever is a copy of Street Fighter II.

Ok, I finished chapter 1.
It seems like only one plank is needed to help Chloe cross the gap, I don't know if this is intentional or just an oversight.

Also I found quite a strange bug; after Chloe joined the party I rushed for the door that says, "2 is the key..." or something. I got stuck there for awhile not knowing what to do, then I decided to leave the room, as I was leaving the room an event played and transported me out side the music school. Huh...

My suggestion is to place the save orb sparingly, It stops becoming a horror game when you give the player so many opportunities to save (IMHO).

Played it, got stuck because I can't find any planks to help Chloe get across the huge gap while playing as Christine. I'm going to write the most scathing review ever, so prepare your anus (not really).

• Pretty good, the game is functional and plays well.

• It is clear that Corpse Party is the main inspiration for the game, so why not add name tag collecting like in that game?

• The art is a little bit weird, especially around the neck (Christine's neck is too long!). However, Chloe's mugshot is fine.

• There are many passability errors but nothing too gamebreaking, just a minor nuisance.
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  One of many: http://s11.postimg.org/haeeazqbj/image.png/

• Uh, I'm assuming you don't want this.
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  http://s11.postimg.org/haeeazqbj/image.png there are many more like this.

• For some reason, I ended up with 10 keys by the end of the maze part.

• I have no idea how to script but I got this error when loading a save after I got a game over.
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  http://s21.postimg.org/vckzd0h07/image.png

I'm sorry if I'm being too nitpicky, my mom raised me using the negative reinforcement method, blame it on her. I have the some of the graphical error I found screencapped, so tell me if you need em.

For what it's worth, at first I played this just to kill time while PC was installing GTA V (stupid 7 discs installation.), but then I ended up playing well over an hour after the installation finished. So I guess that's a good thing?

Interesting, keep doing what you're doing. I'll make sure to play it once it comes out.

I suggest not to use well-known graphical assets like FNAF or the obvious ocarina, it makes your game less presentable. Try using things that are more obscure.

Good luck.

author=Marrend
I've heard somewhere that starting with the end in mind is a technique used to be more efficient, or whatever.

Interesting, I've read somewhere that the best way to spot a mistake in your writing is to read it backwards. Maybe it has something to do with that?