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It is already monochrome?

Space Noir Storyline Help

Well, one of my problems is that, I have no idea on how to end it well. But its for a game.
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The whole game is like that. But, I plan on a Black & White variant for those who don't feel that it looks good, or prefer the original noir style. I actually for some reason prefer the "puke green" over the normal green for some reason.

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Newest version of my tileset for my game, Space Noir.

Space Noir Storyline Help

Thanks for the reply, I've rewritten some of it:

New Storyline Here

How could I show characterization? I was planning on showing character traits when I go more in depth with this, in what they say and specific animated actions they take.

Among Thieves

Your game profile page is top-notch. Subbed.

What are you thinking about? (game development edition)

I'm thinking about my game, Space Noir. I haven't any idea on how to write mystery, or anything else for that matter, and I wanted to have the storyline down before I started to really get into the graphics.

Space Noir Storyline Help

I'd really really appreciate some help with this script. I think this is the right forum, but, I'm not totally sure.
My brother says that the script is terrible, and I'd like a second opinion.
I don't know much about mystery or writing in general. I haven't found anywhere to get help with this so.
Any tips or critiques are welcome!

Take me to the Storyline!
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