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author=halibabica
Brickroad may not attend our site dutifully anymore, but he's still staff!

Thanks for the bruise! I just hit my head on the desk when I heard that. How could I have forgotten! Will Brickroad's level "My Butt Hurts" be featured in the game? It was a pretty cool level!

author=halibabica
That was before we had 32 submissions from one person.

And most of those levels are going to be rejected due to lack of effort.

EDIT: I meant Davenport, not you Shortstar. :-)

Very original, Brickroad. It should be a bonus level! ...at the end of the game.

author=Solitayre
This is not in any way indicative of any level of quality. Also, I couldn't get this level to load, it gave me an error.

Hmm... That's odd. I didn't save it any different than my previous levels... Try it again?

EDIT: Actually, it does show the quality of the level. It shows how much work I put into it, and a level worked hard on is a good level!

Since Shortstar is reviewing all of ours, I thought it fair to review some of shortstar's levels:

Castle1
That level was hard!
1. The second pit of lava at the beginning requires a perfect runing jump. Was that intended?
2. After the checkpoint there's a large pit of lava with blocks above. I wasn't the happiest when I tried to jump but an invisible block knocked me into the lava. >:-(

Mario 2 Cave
This level was pretty fun and well balanced. I enjoyed the storyline along with it. I'm working on a mario game like that myself!
1. On the vine-jumping part before the check point there's a missing tile on one of the tube things.

Mini Mario Mayhem
I like the mini-mario's!
1. This level needs a background. I see where you were going with the whole black screen thing, but it made the level feel incomplete to me. Maybe you should get a cool factory background in there or something.
2. The level seemed to drag on and on. Maybe you should spice it up a bit. Add background objects, different enemies, ...or you could shorten it!

Short Star 1
Nice and short!
1. There's a lot going on on the screen. Maybe you should tone it down a bit by removing some enemies.
2. I didn't see the secret underground part until I looked in the editor. Give the player a hint that it's there. (An arrow of coins, a different pipe, an npc that says it's there, ect.)
3. The part with the wall of bricks was tricky. The wall is too tall.

Shortstar 1-1
Good level. Not much to say here.
1. Actually there isn't anything at all to say here.

Shortstar 2
A nice twist of the second level of SMB3....with projectile goombas
1. There was too many enemies. I died about five times then gave up.

Shortstar 3
I hate lakuti's!
1. Again, a bit long and crowded. Tone her down!
2. This isn't really an issue, but I killed the ladybug at the end and therefor couldn't reach the star. Not an error, just my stupidity.

Shortstar 4-3
It was fun, colorful, and easy.
1. Metroid music in a cloud level? I didn't get it...

Good levels. Nothing original, but nothing too bad.