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author=InfectionFiles
This is insanity

...*shakes your hand*
Hi. I'm Dozen, and I work here. o.o

You must be new.

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author=Leoloria
.-. no comment of the game....

*rolls you around*

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Here^^

Now, comment!:3 Spend your time usefully! Hush, Hush~

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author=Kevincalanor
Yay, Dozen is back (posting, as I'm sure he was stalking all the time) and with Kyouki. :D

Aww~ You guys know me so well!^^(I'm a f*king creep)
author=Marrend
/ten-cent opinion

*pays eleven cents*
Cuz we have history together.

author=Mute
You're not wrong, but I much prefer that everything is finished before people see it so they can enjoy (or try to enjoy) the work in its entirety. I prefer that people can experience the full route the first time they play it. Besides, I'm not going to upload straight to the Finished Content thread until everyone here is satisfied. It's just that I'll write the main route before I release it here.

*~*
Mute is dev of the month, everyone.

You keep it up. Oddly enough, so will I.
Overseer off.

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Yes~ That was Ryoko:3

I am confident I can, finish Kyouki without lining out Ryoko much^^

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...>.>

<.<

i found a theme for Kyouki

*runs off*

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I'd have the player say or think more in the above event.

Custom content creators have a tendency to forget the Player's aboundant inner monologues that helps the pacing. You wouldn't stand there, blank and thoughtless when someone is in the process of dumping you. Silently staring at what's going on doesn't work for drama unless it's justified; To listen to a character rant at you without any sort of reaction (even 'I froze in place from shock' or dot-dot-dot is better than nothing) takes away from gameplay - you have no one to associate yourself or symphatize with.

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And the day has come!^^ New thread, new life.

Use the link above to access the old thread. Enjoy!:3 Overseer off.

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Time to archive the thread, people^^

Opening new artistic discussion. Please refrain from posting here from then on.

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author=Ertad
Well as for the lines its not specific lines and it's not about if writers do it or not it was my self opinion only(not the writer or the game problem but mine with my curious nature...) so if someone like me with curious nature show up and ask:What is the name of the town this story happens at? What will you say?(I dont know...who cares?) What then?(So as Isaid its my self shameless opinion not something I am going to do something with since only the original writer can tell)
If the town's name being unknown really bothers you so much, you can always hang a lampshade over it.

Thank you both. Y'all be on your guard, now. Overseer off.

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author=Ertad
When I played the game the first time I was wondering what the town is called...It looked unnatural that the lines avoided the topic...So lets just say there are situations when its better to call something by its name insetead of avoid it...(ofcourse it is just personal feeling about it there are poeple who may not agree with it:)


Wait, this discussion was about giving the town a name? Completely missed it!o.O

Sorry, you absolutely should not do that. Add your own themes through characterization and subtle changes, not altering the game's premises.