GLOOPMASTER'S PROFILE

author=seiromem
Hey isrieri, what ARE you planning for the Game itself?

Also, what if I submit four levels ;D?

You can't.

RMN will yell at you if you try.

author=masterofmayhem
I know, I somehow managed to do that at one point, but it’s still aggravating if you’re not some sort of SMB deity.

Don't all the RMN compilations require that status? :?

Marrend: Got it. Revision #infinity of those two lines...

Dozen: "automagically" is not coined by me. And fancy words and my brain don't work well.

author=Dozen

author=GloopMaster
She isn't so much mentally unstable as just antisocial as hell.

Asocial, you mean. Antisocial would mean she's an agressive, remorseless liar, not a weirdo outcast.

Ok, ok...

And metally unstable? Well, she's probably stable right now, but how sane you are at any point is not tied to your stability. When unstable, your mental well-being worsens, but you don't get better when you aren't just because you aren't; if that was how it worked psychiatrists would be out of a job. Expecting a mind to fix itself is like expecting a computer to fix itself - it's a silly notion.

It's not like it's the end of the world because i used the wrong word... >.>;

There is no such thing as a completely sane person in real life; you call someone's mental state disordered when her daily life is impeded by the way she thinks and feels, and hers obviously is.

Nope, she's content as can be with being "asocial".

I wouldn't dare to say what she has just yet, but she has something.Edit:Scratch that, she's schizotypal. Silly Dozen, not realizing the obvious.
It's not unusual to consider someone sane when she isn't, personality disorders are usually shrugged off as eccentrics until it's too late. I'm talking from experience here.

She isn't schizotypal, or at least not on purpose. She's simply content with having no friends. It's just that this causes the social awkwardness visible in the events.

author=Marrend
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Does this even work? I don't recall hearing anything like this from Mr. Help File!

Yup.

Character customizer had "<relation>" in the defaults for those two lines.

author=GloopMaster
What is in development, anyway? From what i've read, we've got a pseudo-murderer, an all-in-one girl, and a girl stuck in a time loop (if i understand that correctly).

Who's the all-in-one girl?

Meiga.

We have Kyouki, who has my disorder, developed by me, obviously. Ryoko, a sort of villain/anti-hero for the game, is also under pen - her route is more of a team effort. We have LordNight's Ghost Squad, Triad's girls(Yoko the inventor and mad scientist, especially, and Seira, the 'pseudo-murderer'), Fran the Dream Vestige from Marrend, and semi-secret projects by Nekochi. On the sidenote, Junko's and 21's routes are being renovated.

Ok then. Noted.

author=Marrend

author=GloopMaster
Nami Momohana v0.1beta here! http://www.sendspace.com/file/gg83i9

I find it mildly interesting that I'm the only person who uses RMN's locker-space to store characters. Anyway, second opinion time!

I noticed i even had that after i already uploaded her to sendspace.

You know, it's funny. At one point, you're all like...

ID = 39
OTHER2
NAME KNOWN
Ah. It's <last> <first>.
# Because that's how Japanese people say names. Don't look at me.

...then you get even lazier on us with...

ID = Takuya
That's Nami Momohana. She's a second year student here.

Since obviously this is causing some issues with you guys i'll just make her introduce herself with first name first.

You seem to be vaguely aware of Japanese nomenclature rules, so you could, at the very least, be consistent with them.

Alright. See above.

One more thing to note. This time, about the profile:

CUSTOM 68 = Oh, so my <relation> is your friend as well?
CUSTOM 69 = Oh, so my <relation> is your friend as well?

Whoa, whoa, whoa! Does this even work? I don't recall hearing anything like this from Mr. Help File!

Only in those two lines.

author=Marrend

author=Dozen

author=Marrend
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Does this even work? I don't recall hearing anything like this from Mr. Help File!

Yup.

Why isn't this in the "special tags" section, and more importantly, why haven't I seen this used before now?

Maybe I'm the only one who uses the customizer? :?

author=Dozen

author=GloopMaster
Nami Momohana v0.1beta here! http://www.sendspace.com/file/gg83i9

Another strange one? Isn't that fantastic. Maybe we should name our setting "School for Sufferers of Borderline Clinical Cases of Mental Disorders". Honestly, I half expect a bunch of scientists to pop up and study the area to find out what causes the ridiculous amounts of crazy stuffed into the townies. Not that I'm complaining(or have the right to with my clinical and criminal record), but I find it odd since you probably don't know what else is in development yet.

flowerthief started it. *cough*akari*cough*. She isn't so much mentally unstable as just antisocial as hell. And also assumes that you aren't talking to her, even when you are.

What is in development, anyway? From what i've read, we've got a pseudo-murderer, an all-in-one girl, and a girl stuck in a time loop (if i understand that correctly).

Anyway, the first stories are too short; someone this odd should set off the player's inner comments like firestorm. It got better later on, however, and I've seen a lot worse. I'm sure you will have no trouble fixing that.

Hm, I figured that could be left to the player proper. I can always add some thoughts in on the character's side.

There are also a few typos, but proofing is my job, so unless you want to, don't care about it.

Typos... Typos... Don't see any. Could you be more presice?

And lastly:

author=GloopMaster
# Because that's how Japanese people say names. Don't look at me.

Cut that shit out, it's not funny. If anything, it's offensive(though only mildly, but I prefer to warn before the situation escalates) to those who use the eastern name order, and anyone with cursory knowledge of Japan. The union of these two categories includes, well, just about everyone here(didn't you notice the names on the ID list?).
Ah, and in case you disagree, please retort with an argument, not undecipherable swearing or telling me how I suck at something completely irrelevant.

I figured I might as well make sure that anyone reading that in the editor doesn't come at me with the opposite argument, that I wrote the name wrong. I can remove that quicker than I put it there.