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Suiren
author=FlareBlitzedauthor=devi_catClick "Submit Media" under the games banner picture and categorise it as "Fan art" under "Category". :)
If I wanted to share fanart of your characters, where would be the best place to post it? Here, or somewhere else? :)
Ow, another discover thank you Flare and HikiXD
Sooo Devi_cat put it here without problem, btw be sure that every fanart will go even into our page ;)
Suiren
author=HikiNeetauthor=shayokoActually, that's calledMegumi must be a stupid character...she questions her friends if they can believe the demons story about it being a dream
but...its already been confirmed by them that they passed out.
and frederika. questions how they got into this situation despite the demon explaining that to them mere seconds ago...not being gullible. In situations like this, people like her will try to find logical reasons for everything. Them passing out? Knockout gas. Demon girl? Kidnapper wearing a costume and playing a prank on them. It's customary for someone in a supernatural setting to deny it being real.
Frederika isn't questioning how they got into their situation. She merely made a statement not expecting an actual answer. Have you or someone you've known ever had something strange/bad happen to you and said "How could this happen to me?" Well, it's the same thing with Frederika.
Yes, I couldn't say it better!
author=HikiNeet
You do have a point that Megumi looking away from the party in the CG is strange. It's her and Frederika won't don't seem to get along. Isamu even said during his birthday party that they haven't gotten into an argument (yet) for his sake. Though it seems Megumi's the one who starts their quarrels each time. She's quite antagonistic. Wonder what the history behind that is. Anyway, I wouldn't say their friendship broke apart since there's just friction between those two girls. Things could have gotten worse if Isamu wasn't there to play mediator (since Tomoko obviously is too timid to stop them). I suppose those two aren't friends with each other but with Isamu and Tomoko instead. So even if they don't like each other, they still have to try and be civil and tolerant of each other for Isamu and Tomoko's sake.
Finally someone that notice the relationship between Megumi and Frederika! I'll just say for now that there is obviously a reason for this, but you'll need to wait for the game for this =)
About the CG image, actually Megumi isn't looking away from the party at all, you can easily spot that her eyes isn't pointed to the player. I know that she seem a bit more reserved like this, but my only other choices was to put her in the same position of Frederika or in a profile like Isamu, artistically talking it was so bad that abhored me, this is the meaning with her position.
author=HikiNeet
@Kya90 Went through the updated demo. I still think Tomoko's dot eyes when she goes "eeeeeek!" don't convey her fear but I suppose you might not have any other portraits for those occasions.
We like her that way, that's all, it add a bit of comical moment =) I don't really think that a simple blackout need a full-fear sprite, the dot-eyed face with the add of the blue on the face means basically "OMG" with a tip of fear (like *ewww, a mice!* that's the level) ;)
Thank you again with the new proofreading, I'm really close to my relocation so as I wrote in the blog's entry I won't touch the game for a bit, and the demo won't be upgraded anymore, not for just grammar error or tiny bug.
Just a thing, I'm really REALLY grateful for the help but if for some phrases is only a problem with "it sound a bit better" don't change full phrases, or at least don't get mad if I don't change them, I do that because some of them start to be really far from their original meaning >.< I'm ok with a translation with some changes that make it smoother but I'm afraid to fall into a reinterpretation and I don't want it.
author=devi_cat
If I wanted to share fanart of your characters, where would be the best place to post it? Here, or somewhere else? :)
OMGGGGG fanart of Suiren's char? I'm so happy!!
Well we have The Foxes facebook page, we put there all the fanart that people give to us, if you don't use it just send me a mail with the image link and I'll put on FB with your credit! =D
Suiren
Thank you for your thought =) The dialogue received an inprovements with the latest upload, for the other things we'll work on, after all it's just a demo that cover around... 20% of the total game? XD Still a lot to do.
Just a thing...
Just a thing...
i love the avatars! i assume the dev got them from somewhere.
Absolutely not we're illustrators so avatars and cg are 100% ours ;)
Absolutely not we're illustrators so avatars and cg are 100% ours ;)
Suiren
author=FlareBlitzed
With your permission, I would love to perform a Let's play on your game! :D (P.S Your avatar is menacing! :))
Sure!! =D I've just added a new version of the demo, you can do a let's play on that =) let me know when the video is out, I love to see the various let's play!
Suiren
author=Ghos7Soldier
I actually did a lets play of it and will put it up if that's alright. I thoroughly enjoyed the demo, roughly a 15-30 minute game. I will mention that it is indeed full of grammatical errors from the above mentioned. Even reading it I get flustered over the words when speaking. It's obvious in the video but that's the only real thing I would dock points for. Otherwise, the setting, gameplay, User interface/settings, are really good. The custom sprites and etc. used were very good.
I am looking forward to the full release, I want to hold off on doing any actual reviewing because of the fact that it's only a demo and I can't really feel obliged to do a review for not even half a game.
These are my thoughts, hope you continue to work on the game. =)
Of course it's all right for a let's play, I really want that this game have a good diffusion, it's important for us to have support it give us the strenght to continue the game =) As I said I'm really sorry for the grammar error it's difficult without a real native speaker, fortunally the launch of the demo give us some kind guys that will do the proofreading for the complete release, so we'll work hard to do a game with proper grammar =D
It wasn't on our programs, but maybe if there will be other requests for video, we'll upload even a corrected demo, this is the first time that we have so much video requests so we're not prepared XD
Let me know when your let's play video is out!
Suiren
Men, this will be long! XD
So, let's begin with Dragnfly:
Thank you! Actually we create an hypotetical art gallery of 9 elements just to put a randomic number, in truth the final version of the game will have surely more than 9 images ^^
We tried even with a different resolution of the image but zooming the results was everytime the same -.- Thank you for your help, Demon will try to just remove the zoom option before, if this results immossible I'll ask to you for help 'cause zoomed image are indeed very awful <.<
Than you!! I hope to not disappoint you!
Pikasprey:
Are you kidding me? Sure, it would be a honor! =D Let me know when you release it!
HikiNeet:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. You're super fast and kind, I can't say anything else except if you want to help us with the correction of the complete release too ='D
Meh, I did a mess, I'm no good with the chat codes >.< need to study them a bit XD
So, let's begin with Dragnfly:
author=DragnflyThe art and the designs of the four friends look good. I found 2 CGs in the demo and there's still plenty of slots for more on the gallery. That's really impressive.
Thank you! Actually we create an hypotetical art gallery of 9 elements just to put a randomic number, in truth the final version of the game will have surely more than 9 images ^^
author=DragnflyThe gallery is always appreciated but zoomed images look terrible for me. It's not going to zoom well on any modern resolution. I got around this problem with one of my projects but it's a lot of work. Let me know if you're interested and I'll try to explain in mail. Of course this might not even be a problem if it's just happening to me.
We tried even with a different resolution of the image but zooming the results was everytime the same -.- Thank you for your help, Demon will try to just remove the zoom option before, if this results immossible I'll ask to you for help 'cause zoomed image are indeed very awful <.<
author=DragnflyYeah, I ended up liking Suiren, as expected. I always like the sadistic netherworld overseer types in games. The Corpse Party series had Sachiko and there was Yuka in Gore Screaming Show, for example. Just an advance warning that some people will likely give you hell about Suiren's outfit. Meh, whatever. But I'm just warning that you can expect the usual backlash from people like before.
The original chara designer for Suiren and the other was Demon (his drawings are the ones of the chats, mine are CG's and title screen), Suiren is blessed by his "man's touch" hahahaha! BTW I like her a lot too, we know after the problem with Toraware that there could be problems with the outfit, in fact one of the first thing that she say is that she's not a child even if she has that appearance, we wanted to safeguard ourselves this time XD If even this time it's no good... weh, simply I won't give a fuck, we will never change Suiren into a hot milf just to preserve her outfit, that is the character and that will remain!
author=DragnflyBugs/problems/odd stuff:
The big problem is, as you already know, the English. There's a lot of problems with it. Since you and the translator aren't native English speakers it's great that you have a proofreader. But if the proofreader has already gone through this and made their fixes then it absolutely needs a 2nd pass. I'll volunteer. If the proofreader hasn't touched it yet then this entire problem might be nothing. We'll have to wait and see.
Sorry for the english again, even if it's better than Toraware it's not good enough again T_T if I can say a thing, I was in a hurry for the completation of the demo, because in less than a month I'll need to transfer in another State, so I make the translater to rush for complete it quickly... I promise that the complete release will be more and more accurate, thanks for your volunteering!
author=DragnflyWhen you speak to the bunny in the pink dress at the bottom of the south room it yawns, then gets the Zzzzzz emote. But it does this every time you talk to it. Is it supposed to yawn the 2nd time you talk to it? I guess it all depends on if you mean that you keep waking the bunny up and it just yawns and goes right back to sleep. Stop being a jerk to the bunny, Frederika:)
Mmmm... this thing of the bunny now that I think about it is true, we'll fix it!
author=DragnflyWhen the painting rips, Isamu says he'll tell the girls what he saw. But when you get back to them he just says there's no reason to go back there and even right up to the puzzle he doesn't really tell them.
I wanted to make it implied, because he see the ripped painting just a minute before he rejoins the girls and if he talks again about the pic seemed to me a bit redundant, but if you think that he should say it clearly I'll fix even this =)
author=DragnflyStuff to be careful of in the final version:
Since the characters walk in a conga line they can block the path of anything else that's moving. Consider your puzzles and if this would break them.
They are rarely together, for the rest of the game you have to play them singularly so the conga line is not a real problem ;)
author=DragnflyAll in all I'm looking forward to the final version.
Than you!! I hope to not disappoint you!
Pikasprey:
author=PikaspreyWould you be okay with Let's Plays being done for the demo? Of course, I'd be very clear that it's an early version.
Are you kidding me? Sure, it would be a honor! =D Let me know when you release it!
HikiNeet:
author=HikiNeetA friendship between three girls and one boy, hmm. You don't see that often. This reminds me ofCorpse Party if you've ever heard/watched/played it before. The characters in that game perform a 'Forever After' charm so that they stay friends forever even though one girl is moving away. Unfortunately, they did it for fun and didn't expect that doing it would get them pulled into another world where their lives are in danger. The worst part is that those who die in Heavenly Host will feel the pain they felt during their death for all of eternity and their souls will be trapped forever unable to pass on to the afterlife.
I wonder if the individual character deaths in this game, depending on how good/bad the ending route you're on, will be just as gruesome and heart-wrenching.
This also kind of reminds me of Anohana too. The characters in that anime forgot a promise they made long ago when they were children. In the end, they do figure it out...
Yeah I know Corpse Party well =) (not the anime AnoHana actually XD)
In truth, the only ispiration that we had was from Nightmare on Elm street's series, about the demon that lives in dreams, and that's all (The name FREDerika is a homage to this too). For now, I can say that there would be bloody parts, but hardly so much gruesome as Corpse Party. =)
In truth, the only ispiration that we had was from Nightmare on Elm street's series, about the demon that lives in dreams, and that's all (The name FREDerika is a homage to this too). For now, I can say that there would be bloody parts, but hardly so much gruesome as Corpse Party. =)
author=HikiNeetWell, unfortunately I have a lot of corrections/grammar mistakes/wrong word usages for you that I spent a few hours combing through. I too offer my proofreading services. My corrections/additions are in bold or I'vestruck throughwhat should be removed:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. You're super fast and kind, I can't say anything else except if you want to help us with the correction of the complete release too ='D
Meh, I did a mess, I'm no good with the chat codes >.< need to study them a bit XD
Suiren
author=Dragnfly
I'm stuck in the demo with the pink guy's quiz.
Yeah, you miss a flag! After you leave the hallway with Isamu, you need to go and talk again with the pink bunny half-asleep. She'll give you a big hint for the right answer, even if you respond correctly without this the pink guy will kill you because you're responding casually =)
Suiren
author=Dragnfly
Your rooms look really good. There's some clear space to run around in. Will there be chases? Don't feel obligated to answer if you'd rather it be a surprise.
Thank you for your compliments ^///^ About this questions, well there won't be chasing events... in the demo =P I'll leave you with this!
author=HikiNeet
You had me at dream realm. It doesn't seem like it'll have a good story but then again, most horror RPGmakers don't go too in-depth with that anyway. Multiple protagonists seems like a redundant feature to me unless you can control any of the four friends instead of just Frederika? Multiple endings, hmm. Some will live, others will die. There tends to be a route where everyone dies and one where everyone lives. You probably have to work for the latter though. There could even be an ending where someone keeps Suiren company.
Well, hopefully the characters are well-written and developed enough so that I'll actually be upset if they get killed. It's more emotional that way.
Obviously there won't be four characters just to add a tail to Frederika XD About the story, I hope that in the end you will reconsider it once the game will be fully developed, games with lack of story ever bothered me and create a world with just four dummies that goes around screaming with just the purpuose to survive it's not absolutely my idea of game =)
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
Whew, I missed some comments lately =O so:
Thank you for your link, I didn't know about this and there are some facts that are so similar to the game! =O Dunno if I should be happy or scared XD It's ok if you don't want to play it, BTW your intervention is really useful =)
author=shayoko
Random thoughtsbefore the game actually starts i have a feeling one major question that wont be answered is how the hell this scenario could ever take place?
men are rarely left with kids legally. the government would have to not know about them for this to happen.
them not going to school or having tutors is a dead giveaway.
Well... if you find Misaki's diary you can read that she was never ever showed to the outside world, she was born at home and never went to an hospital, how can the government know about her if noone knows that she exist? ^^"
i don't get the characters actions :( one ending just utterly destroys Ais character...
her goal was to be free and then she just decides to stay?...
and the reason for staying no sense.she already decided that she wasn't really living in her current situation.
She simply broke, an 8 yo that kills her father, even if it's an asshole, he really was her whole world and the only things she knew, it doesn't seem such a strange development for me... but btw it's a "mad end", everyone could take it differently.
-The grammar was horrible
Again,I'm NOT english, and sadly almost all italians are goat with it, or at least want a payment and if I don't receive a cent I don't see why I need to pay someone for translation. I'm working with a proofreader now to correct the game (thx for your mail too), I'm sorry that the language was such a burden for a lot of people but the same things will go on even with my future game (horrible english THEN corrected version) so please deal with it.
author=Goddialgaauthor=shayokoalso i wonder if were going to get any reason why the dad is like this? if someone fell in love with him and had a kid. you'd imagine more likely they are a somewhat decent person at least.author=shayoko
but the father i don't understand at all.
In my opinion,the father was like that because he was like that.
That's how it works and seems to be what the creator was trying to tell us. (Correct me if I was wrong :P)
No you get exactly trought the point =) It's not like everything must have a phylosophical background, just to say it straight, he's a pedophile and that's all XD Sincerely start an explanation of something like, "his sad childhood and so on" seemet to me quite pointless on a 20 min long game yet super-prolix.
And he could fake his nice parts and hide his real wicked side to achieve his true goal. Human can do that so I see nothing wrong about it.
Again, you're right =)
author=Sated
To the people who don't understand the father, please look into some of the real-life examples of things like this happening. Here is a recent example (as in it was uncovered recently; it was actually going on for a long time) from the UK. Horrible people exist and I don't see why that is a great mystery.
Thank you for your link, I didn't know about this and there are some facts that are so similar to the game! =O Dunno if I should be happy or scared XD It's ok if you don't want to play it, BTW your intervention is really useful =)
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