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Homeless Brothers
The life of two brothers where there are obstacles everywhere including evil eyes.

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Let's work on your game descriptions!

Could someone please fix the grammatical mistakes of my description?
Below -V-

"Two brothers have been passing their days in the street since the day their parents died. They lost their parents because of a tragic car accident. After the accident, they lost their home as well. The reason behind losing their home right after the accident occurred is unknown.

The two brothers haven't reached the stage when they can earn money for themselves. They have started spending their life by begging food and staying in the street. It is very difficult for them to survive every day. The difficulty has increased when the evil eyes have made the two brothers apart from each other for a bad intention.

Will they ever know the reason behind losing their home?
Can they escape from those evil eyes?"

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The couches are black colored. That's why in the dark screen they look more darker. But they are understandable at least.

Black Dog

Subscribed it. :)

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author=cutiesbae
I really like the new sprites!

Thank u. :)

Revenge

Thanks Surfsushi for your concern. :)
Recently I am working on those mistakes. I fixed them. Now I believe everything is fine and will be fine.

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hmmmm. I am fixing those things. :)

Revenge

author=cutiesbae
I tried the demo and I think it's very interesting, it has also a very nice dark atmosphere. Subscribed!

(Sorry for my bad English)


Thanks for trying it. ^_^
That doesn't matter. My English isn't also good as English isn't my language. :)

If...

It looks cool.

Revenge

author=WonderlyneWorld
I like your game. To be the first game is fine. It reminds me a Little of the rpg game `Paranormal Syndrome´ (maybe because of the paranormal theme :)

I think the characters are correct and adequate for the game. The story is also interesting. I want to know more about Yuri´s story.
About the problems during the game I didn´t find anything. But during a second playing there is a part when you are with Ben where you can go from the map of the houses to the fields map.

At first it is not a problem, but once you enter into the map you can´t go back and you have to leave the game and re-enter again.
It´s not a serious problem, but I think I should mention it.
Sorry for my gramar. English is not my first lenguaje.

I would like to ask if someone has told you to translate your game into a language. I am starting to translate games, but I would like to translate your demo into Spanish, if you give me permission.

Good luck with the game.


Thank you for playing demo.

About the problem that you have mentioned is already discussed in previous comment.
I forgot to fix it. But after submitting game, I had fixed it. You will not find this problem in the full version game.

Right now, I can't give you permission for translating this demo. After the completion of this game, I will think about it. :)
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