ROSE_GUARDIAN'S PROFILE

My submission for Robo Clash is still pending but I am worried my description might cause it to get denied. Here my description.


-2852 A.D.-


The world had become extremely advanced. The space program was very common now and so was space travel. Upon traveling through space a new planet was discovered outside the earth’s solar system. As satellites and probes were sent to take pictures of the planet a history changing discovery was made. The planet had intelligent life. The inhabitants of the planet were extremely advanced. They looked exactly like humans. This lead to the people of Earth wanting to interact with them. So they contacted them and surprisingly they spoke English and other Earth languages. The people called the planet Kaidia. They explained that they had been to Earth several thousand years ago during ancient Egyptian times through ancient Greece and Rome. Therefore their planet was similar to Earth in certain ways. However there were also aliens called Ravians with the ability to turn into a giant monster like form. The Ravians were also planet hunters. They had taken over almost every planet in the Kaiden Solar System that had intelligent life. It turned out that planet Kaiden was supervised by the Ravians and they were not free either. The people of Earth couldn’t understand why the Kaidens wouldn’t fight back. The only answer that they got from the Kaidens was; “You don’t understand. They are powerful and can even survive in space without any air or anything else.”
This answer made the Earthlings curious. How could anything intelligent that is, survive in space without any air or anything else? This curiosity lead to stupidity. The Earthlings then sent out satellites and probes to planet Ravis to study them. The Ravians found out about this and went to Earth so that they could take the planet. Their giant monster like form was no match for Earth’s military. No matter what they did or what weapons they used the Ravians wouldn’t fall. So Earth was lost to the humans.

-2992 A.D.-

Earth was now under supervision of planet Ravis and was no longer free. However there was still hope for Earth to correct their mistake that they made back in the 29th century. They contacted planet Kaidia and surprisingly they were willing to help since they both wanted freedom. So The World Freedom Force was created to fight against the Ravians. With the help of planet Kaidia they gave them life forms that were giant robots that could be piloted by people who could give the robots’ orders, and were able to take out Ravians in a couple blows. Earth and Kaidia then announced that they were rebelling against the Ravians and war started. No, one knew much about the robotic lifeforms who were helping the pilots, but they did promise that they would set them free after the war.

-3012 A.D. Present-

Now that there is a World Freedom Force against the Ravians with the giant robotic lifeforms. Earth and Kaidia began recruiting people to pilot the robots. They had to be eighteen or older and have a high I.Q. in order to operate the robots. So now begins the battle for freedom.

Anyway I can explain this better if it's bad?

@Touchoulicious
I am horrible at doing reviews myself. All I can really say is try not to be too harsh, because some developers are intimidated by too much harshness, and then give up on their game thinking they'll never get better. I would also give them some advice on how they can improve.

@Sated
I'd say both are poor quality. No, offense, or anything.

XD I forgot piano sorry about that.

For some reason when I try to save it goes to the save menu, but won't save.

EDIT: Never mind I didn't know you had to find a save point XD. I am such a dumb, dumb. Sorry.