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The Story A Boy Wrote
by Jacob Strout

The cavern was as dark as the stone it was made of, only pierced shallowly by the beam of light held by the party. The sounds of the river echoed drip drip in unfathomable steady reason. The smells of dirt, mud, and mold upon stale air bit their nostrils.

The female of the party peered over the edge of the safety below and beforeâ€"sighing with disgust. She sat with the torch, drawing out another to light and drop into the expanse. The small orb slowly faded from view.

“A long way,” mentioned Saythe conversationally. “I wonder how many dresses from Miss Alvene it would take to tag from end to end to that bottom.”

Imus straightened from standing next to Faylithe, and glanced down with a reply. “With or without the Ladies wearing them?”

Saythe smiled with perversion. “Wellâ€"”

“Quiet, Saytheâ€"Imus.” The strong voice of their elder, Belivant. “Your tavern musings are not fit for the ears of your sister.” He gave both a solid stare, the demand for obedience. Imus and Saythe lowered their eyes, muttering apologies in a half-hearted manner. It was not as if their musings did not exist when Belivant was not there to forestall them around their sister.


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Anyone interested in the rest of the first scene? Fairly long in terms of scenes, almost 5,000 words. I can post it in smaller increments.

I'm just sort of dying for comments. No one ever seems to want to read it. :( Maybe I sucks.

editted: To add in line breaks.

Serious injuries

Actually I did die from blood loss. I'm a zombie of the night, currently. (Still have to keep my day job. Zombieing does not pay the brains.)

Err, yeah, it wasn't too much discharging that I was going to die from it. I was getting light headed towards the end right before it pretty much stopped, but other than that, it was just a real pain in the ass.

How about we DONT duplicate sprites now... sav'vy?

author=Despain link=topic=286.msg3717#msg3717 date=1191456422
screenshot your code. we can't do much to help you if we have no idea what the hell you're doing

Serious injuries

I fractured my left wrist from being falling with my hand against a curb, (better than my face I guess...) my appendix ruptured, and I recently got an abdominal infection in which I hosed blood out of my ass every 1-3 hours for 3 days, often puking while I was on the toilet. Had to eat apple sauce and toast for 3 days.

Happy Birthday, Michael Jackson!

you wanna know what?

The game isn't the issue at all.

you wanna know what?

If I were an admin and you were posting games for people that were purposefully banned, I'd ban you too.

The New Deal

*prostrates self*

HOW DO U GET PIC?

Why can't you delete Loz: Next Generation?

...was Grod456 just compared to Socrates? :D