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Avelions - The Ancestors
The beginning of all stories~

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Let's work on your game descriptions!

1) Ah, I see. Forgive me for my ignorance.
Thank you for enlightening me. :)

2) I think I'll use "the demons of the Daegon Tribe". It sounds really nice. :)

3) lol. yes, it's my bad habit, I tend to create sentences with lots of information. Bulking up everything (even the dialogue in-game) with unnecessary explanation.

So, the game description would be like...

Within the sky-archipelago of Althandar, lived a race of pure-blood first humans, called Skyrean. The last King's Gathering in the Axis of the Three Worlds of Existence gave the Skyrean a "reason" to form an alliance with the demons of the Daegon Tribe to obliterate the "lesser" human species.

The resulting war was a lost cause. Kingdoms fell, and millions of people perished. What few that did survive were driven to slavery or worse, with the demons and Skyrean placing themselves into more influential, ruling, positions. The nation of Diaclou, with it's impressive industry and technology, was spared the expense of this war. In the interim, an elite force within it's Eisenclad Army, has become the hachet-men for the remnants of free humanity.

This story centers on an officer of a contingent of that army, named Lucain. He has placed himself somewhat squarely in justifying all reasons and motives. This leads him to a vicious truth that has been concealed over the past centuries.

...this? Is it fine to merge the second and third line into one paragraph? *The resulting war was... & The nation of Diaclou...

Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=Marrend
Maybe something like...
...this?

Hello, thanks for fast response. :)
It's perfect except for a few things I want to make sure :

1. Within "it's" Eisenclad, or within "its" Eisenclad?

2. Daegon Clan is the clan that once ruled over the Demon World.
Would it be better to use "demons" instead of using the name of the clan?

-> ...gave the Skyrean a "reason" to form an alliance with the demons to obliterate the "lesser" human species.

3. I want to remove Maegarf's name there. And give Lucain a little confusion muddled the role-playing as a main character. Something like :

-> This story centers on an officer of a contingent of that army, named Lucain, who places himself somewhat squarely in justifying all reasons and motives, leading him to a vicious truth that has been concealed over the past centuries.

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Hi Marrend! It's been a while. Could you help me to check this out too :

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SETTING

Set on a sky archipelago called Althandar, the pure-blood First Human who is now called as Skyrean, inhabit six nations that naturally hostile to one another. Diaclou with its Eisenclad Army is the only nation that remains neutral since it has complete control over the Elemantra Particles and doesn't need to triumph over industrialized powers.

STORY

Excessively afraid of the grave threats of human supremacy over the past centuries, the majority of Skyrean from Althandar decided to form an alliance with the Daegon Clan from Juheimhen in order to obliterate every single human ambassadors that was seen during the Kings Gathering in the Axis of the Three Worlds of Existence.

Without their champions, the humankind lost every hope to fight back. Their kingdoms fell and million people perished during the war for dominance. Those who survived the war being enslaved by the Skyrean, meanwhile, the demons from Juheimhen substitute themself in human's place to rule over the lands.

The story centers on Lucain, a member of Eisenclad Army's elite group that existed for the sole purpose of destroying the last remnants of human civilization. And the one who adamantly opposed the army, Maegarf.

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I deeply thank you for helping me with the game descriptions all this time. :)

LIVENEL ~Teirra Map Update 2~

There's a lot of inconsistency in that map. I'll fix it soon.

LIVENEL ~Old Battle System~

It's a battle system for the old version of the game. I decided to use Classic ATB-Sideview Battle System for the future release.

Kasatmata (The Seen) - Chapter 1

author=Dragol
How about to write some walkthrough or itema locations or hints or anything for such clueless players like me? Cuz I spent like 3 hours for game and have no idea how to get anything but bad endgings.


Apologies for the late reply. Sure, I'll post a new blog and write some crucial hints in it. Give me a day or two. :)

Avelions - The Ancestors

author=EgyLynx
Anyway... Why that Vt are MASTERED level?


I don't understand this question, could you tell me in detail? Sorry for "late" reply, I thought there would be no more feedback for this game. :)

AV5_Event01.JPG

author=orange-
Woah this one is incredible! Really epic shot!


I thought it was too dark to see. XD Thank you!

AV5_Map05.jpg

author=orange-
Yeah I second that! Had to subscribe man! I'm happy to see ambitious stuff on RPG Maker MV.

Thank you so much! :)

LIVENEL: Nocturnal Skyrift

author=orange-
I'm downloading the demo. The game looks incredible, I'll give feedback later. I'm curious about the graphics. Are they custom, or some graphics pack? Either way the end results are amazing.

Hello orange-, thanks for the kind words. I'm using High Fantasy Pack + Medieval Expansion Pack by PVGames and some others (There's an opening credits sequence in the beginning of the game, you can check the list there). This game has so many flaws. Hope to hear more from you!