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Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

I've found a couple of secrets while playing and I'm wondering if anyone else has found others.

Salary Raise
Visiting "Station" on Saturday may lead to meeting your Supervisor. Raises salary by 450 bucks.


Calculator
Visiting the Convenience store may lead the Sales Clerk to giving you a defective calculator. It shows the probability of passing Attribute Checks; i.e. "Should I try giving advice? I have an x % chance of getting it right"


...And a tip. Athletics is an important attribute. Miki, Keika, Riho and Shikoko all have athletic checks early on in their story lines.

Testing

I found some typos while playing.

Game Story 1; Story 4
Line begins with: "Better hurry! The sands in the hourglass are a'spilling'." There is a space missing in between a and spilling.


Game story 1; Story 21; branch D
Line begins with: "Not sure yet...or so I'm told"
the last part of that line is missing a period.


Game story 4; Story 6
Line says: "Any potential sweethearts?"
sweethearts is not technically a typo, but a space in between would make for easier reading


Game Story 5; Story 4; branch B
Lines says: "Why would I chase Miki if Miki...
I believe a comma is missing; why would I chase Miki, if Miki...


Game Story 6; Story 2 ; branch A & C
In both these scenarios Keika says tutalo as a farewell. I think its spelled too-da-loo


Game Story 12; Story 7 ; Ending 7
Line begins with: After the trip...but anyway, my dad doesn't is happy...
i think "doesn't" got slipped in by accident


...And finally a suggestion.

Player character talks alot about taking mental notes. I thought it might be cool if you could add a mental note feature. After making the evening phone calls, players can then review mental notes if they want. Mental notes would have information girls have told you, like preferred dating locations, when was the last time you talked to them, what gifts you've given them so far and could include player character's opinion on the girl.

*edit* just found another typo
Game Story 5; Story 29
Line says: "is Miki with you."
should have a question mark instead of a period

Testing

First off; great work. The game is addicting enough that I played through in one sitting.

That said, here a few observations:

1. Some of the font is a bit hard to read. Maybe darken the textbox a bit?

2. The part time job seems a bit rough even on normal setting. Maybe slow down the guys who beat you up a bit? Or better yet; ramp up the difficulty as you progress through the story.

3. I had the game crash on me once. Sorry I didn't grab the save file but I can walk you through what happened. 61 day, Saturday I went to the fashion mall and got the old bike event. I went to the convenience store, and they tried to sell me a used toy. Went back to fashion mall. Got the old bike event again. Chose the nearest road option and the game crashed during transition.

And I found 4 girls, finished on generic ending 2.