METAL_KITTY'S PROFILE

I like writing and drawing. I enjoy creating games with a story.
I am currently working on a game called "Angel's Tears".

Sorry if I make any grammatical mistakes, English isn't my native language and I am still in school :)
Saviour: Angel's Tears
When Angel is diagnosed with a serious brain tumor, it is your task to collect as many reminders of you two together to temporary stop her memories from fading.

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Sounds so cool, but I get an error when I open it... RGSSE202E.dll not found (or something like that)

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@karins_soulkeeper
That's actually a genius idea :)
And I know right, those forum people saved my ass a few times now!

Thank you for your idea, just "Remembering" is a good replacement :)

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@metal_kitty
I think you could just call it 'Remembering'. But that's just me, so...
Oh and it's not just Marrend who's willing to help. Everyone is. This was the reason why I decided to stay here. These guys are the best ;D

@Marrend
Yeah I gues it does sound a bit unprofessional. I'll rewrite it then put it back up here, hoping for improvements :)
Thanks!

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@Marrend
Thank you so much!
About the credits; you're right. I will render the game again with the updated credits in it :)

I have a problem with the "chapters" though. It goes from "Prologue" to "Chapter 1: remembering" to "Epilogue". I know "Chapter" suggests more chapters, but I don't know how I would call it otherwise.

EDIT: Maybe I should call it "Stage"? I need something to indicate that the actual game-play will start then, but won't suggest more "chapters"

Oh, and completely off-topic:
It's really great you're here spending your time to help others like me. I really appreciate it! :)

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Hey everyone, I resubmitted it, but it got denied again...

Here it is:

:In general:
This is my first RPG project I've ever made. Only the Prologue is done yet, but I'm working on the first and only chapter and on the Epilogue.
This RPG is not a "fighting" style RPG. It's more about the story, so sometimes you can get a lot of text.
The prologue should take you about 20-30 minutes to complete (rough estimation).
I have no idea when the full game is done. I want to complete it this year at last.

If you find bugs, grammatical incorrect sentences or other imperfections, please contact me. I posted this game because I want feedback.

Oh, and if you find any spelling errors/incorrect grammar, I am not a native speaker of the English language :3

:Story:

While Ethan pays a visit to a foreign country, his better half Angel gets diagnosed with a serious brain tumor. When he returns and finds out, he is heartbroken when the doctor tells him Angel will slowly forget things about him and their relationship.

The only thing that can temporary prevent her memory from fading are things that have to do with the young couple, such as photos, letters, videos and so on.
Ethan is determined to let Angel not forget about their special relationship and searches far and wide to gather as many objects he can find.

:The main character:
Ethan is the one you'll play as. He is very attached to his girlfriend Angel, in such a way you could call them meant to be. He would do anything for her.
You could count Angel as a main character as well. Though you won't see her that much in the game, she is a major element since Ethan does the whole "memory-searching" for her.

:Credits:
In the extracted game map you'll also find a document called "Credits_READ_ME". I find it extremely important to point out that I am not the owner of most drawn characters, music and tilesets.
I only generated faces and characters, but I also searched on forums for other characters. If you consider yourself to be in the credits while you're not, and are sure that you deserve a place there, contact me.
I tried to put everyone from whom I've taken resources in the credits, but I could have forgotten someone.

One of the most important people that are not in the credits is Kevin MacLeod. I got most of the ingame music from his website http://incompetech.com/ . Next update I will include him. Check it out, he is awesome!

:Walkthrough:
In the extracted map is also a Walkthrough document. Please only use it if you are really stuck on the game.

Let's work on your game descriptions!

@karins_soulkeeper
Exactly what I was planning to do ;) Amazing, thanks for the help :D

@Marrend
Thank you so much! That's actually a great idea :)

Thank you all guys for my help.
The game is now pending :3