REESE-YAMAWE'S PROFILE

author=Dragnfly
My plans to work on my own project for the rest of the night fell through so I'll give this a try.

-MV can use custom icons for the taskbar!? AWESOME! I didn't know that.
-OMFDDHGFTG She's so cute! Really cute! I also love your music choice and your minimalist menu with the blur.

Now on to the problems. Since English isn't your first language you should note that you can still ask people for help. If you're not a native speaker then I only dock points if I can't understand what you mean or if there's an English problem that completely breaks the atmosphere.
-Is the lack of capital letters in the intro a stylistic choice?
-Your mapping has some problems. I'm only about 20 seconds in and I've run into passabality issues and some of the auto tiles aren't being used correctly.
http://i.imgur.com/GBd3BJR.jpg
-The girl you meet at the house phases through the door. It's always a good idea to have the door open/close as usual. Especially since there's no audio in that scene so it's even more noticeable.
-Typo when getting your notebook. http://i.imgur.com/8ABBZ93.png ("Did I leave" --- and "and when checking it again http://i.imgur.com/Zdy7dTc.png though your meaning is still obvious.
-When looking around in the other house http://i.imgur.com/vcVTGLD.jpg
.... I'm gonna stop tracking your lack of capitalization, actually. It seems to be completely random and it's absolutely all over the place so it can't be blamed on secondary languages or whatnot. I can understand what the characters are saying. It's just really off-putting how sometimes lines start with capital letters and sometimes they don't.
-Text gets cut off http://i.imgur.com/dTo8kNK.png

Show

-I got stuck here http://i.imgur.com/AYWlM3t.png I'm missing something for the door but I checked all the non-black papers. Some seem uncheckable. I even checked a black one just to see and sure enough, game over. It's clear that I need to take my bone paper to the dog but I can't. I can't go back up to the top part since that paper near the hallway blocks my path.

I'll come back to it some other time. It does show promise and it's interesting.

author=Pikasprey
I wanna give this a try. Would it be alright if I recorded a Let's Play video of the game?

author=Marrend
I'm thinking something like...

Dark Sketch is a dark, atmospheric RPG that focuses on puzzles and chase-events. Players take on the role of Kyleen. She passes by an old house, and meets a girl there. Upon reaching her own home, she realizes that she left something behind at the old house, and went back to fetch it. When she arrived, she heard a strange noise. Curious, she investigated the house. While she found what she left behind, but, she could not find the girl she met earlier, or what caused the noise. Kyleen shrugged it off, and tried to leave. However, she soon found that the house had a will of it's own, and it would not allow her to leave just yet. If at all!

Features
- Original characters and story
- Edited/altered sprite designs and tilesets
- 2 protagonists
- Original illustrations
- 3 different endings

...this, though I could be taking a few liberties. As for a place to put tips, I would recommend adding a tab to the gamepage that has that information in it. I'm 99% sure that you can't do this until after the gamepage is accepted. However, the sequence of clicks to use in this game's case would be Manage Games->Dark Sketch->Pages->Add Page.