LET'S WORK ON YOUR GAME DESCRIPTIONS!

author=Trihan
Stormville is a small kingdom caught in the crossfire of a brewing war. In the game you play as Vince, a swordsman striving to carry out his dead brother's wishes. During his travels he will gain strength and the aid of companions who will help him to save Stormville and the rest of the world.

PLOT:
The drums of war have begun to beat. Across the world, countries are striving for power and control at the expense of smaller villages and kingdoms--especially Stormville. Ryle, the son of Stormville's king, has captured Stormville and assimilated it into the Thunder Country for which he works.
Prior to Ryle's betrayal, the king decreed that should anything happen to him Vince's brother Jordan would take his place as king and deliver Stormville from oppression. However, during Vince and Jordan's escape attempt they were attacked by Cia, another Thunder Country captain. Jordan sacrificed his life to save Vince, leaving him the burden of responsibility.

FEATURES:
+Non-traditional character progression: Stats and skills aren't improved by levelling; the player will have to rely on equipment and items to advance, meaning you can't overpower your enemies simply by levelling up.
+Equipment Levels: Improve your battle skill by levelling weapons and armour.
+Crafting System: Create your own equipment using collected components!
+Side view Battle System ( CUSTOM ACTION SEQUENCES )
+And more! (Still in production, I'll add more soon!)

Introduction + Battle System Demo (DEMO V.0.1)
The character in the demo has all skills with no MP cost so you can try everything out. Have Fun!

Note: Talk to the boy at the end of the demo.
It will start a battle with a training dummy so you can try out skills without you or the enemy dying.
Demo Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/y0dmccyj518itgk/STORMVILLE%20-%20Demo%201.exe

author=edchuy
Let me give it a try:

Plot:

Enter the lives of 6 people and their group. See how their lives intertwine during a hunt and serial killing by a modern day "Jack the Ripper".

Play as Vash and his group of stray dogs while they struggle to get their daily meal in a puzzle adventure.

Witness "The Red Tail" while she's doing her Great Heist a la stealth mode.

Fight in a group of hired guns working for scientists with the noble goal of making the ultimate cure (NOTE: perhaps you can specify cure for what?).

Become the bounty hunter "The Silver Bullet", hunting criminals, gearing up for the next Wanted on your list and finding love.

Last but not least, become the hunter, seeing the life of your victims vanish at your hands as "Jack the Ripper".

Genres: RPG, Mystery, Comedy, Drama, Action

Features:

- Dungeon crawler with a Bounty Hunter system
- Collect materials to create even stronger weapons
- Unlock more bounties with your other characters to get additional sidequests
- Chose one of many girls and make them fall in love (NOTE: This could be described as a Dating System)
- 100% custom sprites, tilesets, pictures (NOTE: could be images, depending on what you mean) and character facesets
- Cutscenes presented in custom-made comic strips

Sounds interesting. I hope it helps ...

author=Trihan
The main problem is that you haven't finished Future Helper yet and we're all anxiously waiting for it.

Introduction/Teaser
"Welcome players! I'm the game developer of Destiny Online! As you all know, Destiny Online is the first game to be powered by Augmented Dual Reality technology (ADR for short). This technology lets you experience the game with no hardware or software needed, and it will be as if you are really there! To win, just conquer all the dungeons scattered around the world! But be warned, in-game death means real life death!" - The Game Master

Game info
Connected: Destiny, is an RPG that puts players in a deadly virtual-reality game called Destiny Online. Since it's VR, in-game death means death in real life. As the game progresses, you will travel around the virtual world, meet new friends, new enemies, conquer dungeons, save lives, and start a guild. Eventually, players will get involved with the Helper.net security plan to shutdown Destiny Online for good. Plans for possible relationships with characters are in the works.

Characters

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Shiri
A average depressed guy that wanted to get away from it all, but soon realized that there is more to life than getting away from things. A swordsman in DO, his duel-wielding style punishes even the most toughest of opponents with ease.

Rick
A current worker at GameLIVE. If there is any game-related question that a person could have, he's the man to ask. In the bounds of DO, he serves as a healer.

Sera
Current leader of Helper.net security. With her unique skills as a thief, she never gets caught by anyone!

"The Game Master"
No one know who he is, but he runs Destiny Online. There is some rumors floating about that he tips the scales to ensure player death occurs more often than it probably should...

More characters will be revealed as the game progresses.

Features:
Relation/Reputation system - This is my first attempt at implementing a relation/reputation system. The intention is that the gameplay will change depending on how players manage their potential allies in the game.

One death battle system - As Destiny Onlne is essentially a death trap, one of your tasks is to keep what party members you obtain alive. If anyone in your party falls, it's GAME OVER!

Mini-games - Ideations for mini-games that keep players occupied for hours are in the works.

author=edchuy
Sorry, jomar, could you tell me if there was anything other than posting it here that the person who denied it mentioned regarding your Game Description?

author=?"Please proofread the game description. This topic is helpful: http://rpgmaker.net/forums/topics/13072/".

author=Shikon Jewel. EXE
A program that allows the user to save combat data
from other allies.

Is the description SJ.Exe's or the one you made?

author=Shikon Jewel. EXE
A program that allows the user to save combat data
from other allies.