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CloseWow, Triad, those rips are very impressive! Bravo!:D My blobs feel a little bland in comparison:( Her hair creeps me out a little though. It looks like it cuts trough her NECK. Uncanny Valley material, that one part.
On another note, I've finished Maeda's story. By that too I'm impressed, but would you mind if I got my hands on some grammar issues and smacked it into shape before I'd upload it to RMN? You could, of course, have a look at my modified version before that happens.
On another note, I've finished Maeda's story. By that too I'm impressed, but would you mind if I got my hands on some grammar issues and smacked it into shape before I'd upload it to RMN? You could, of course, have a look at my modified version before that happens.
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sure i don't have any problems with that or time to work on her but i would still like to give it a once over after you do the grammer stuff if you don't mind. As for the rips you can thank marrend for that they were mostly his idea
EDIT is there a simple way to make her hair flair upwards at the ends?(i was hoping i could give her what i call the firestarter effect)
Your ink blots are a lot better then mine were
EDIT is there a simple way to make her hair flair upwards at the ends?(i was hoping i could give her what i call the firestarter effect)
Your ink blots are a lot better then mine were
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everything is done except testing and the profile the 2 most time consuming parts but i don't have to go back to work till sunday morning so i should have it posted today or tomorrow
Thank the "Just one more!" option from a certain poll made on game's official site for this. No, I'm not even close to being done, but I'm trying to focus on other matters at the moment.
I hope you can enjoy what there is of this character, though!
*Edit: Actually, now that I mention it, one can thank that poll for the avatar I'm displaying right now as well.
I hope you can enjoy what there is of this character, though!
*Edit: Actually, now that I mention it, one can thank that poll for the avatar I'm displaying right now as well.
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here is the beta version more testing is needed but all criticism are welcome http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
For anyone not familiar with the production of this charector she is a maydere so expect foul language violance and death threats oh and a bikini oh she has only been limitedly tested on 1.0
For anyone not familiar with the production of this charector she is a maydere so expect foul language violance and death threats oh and a bikini oh she has only been limitedly tested on 1.0
author=triad2
here is the beta version more testing is needed but all criticism are welcome http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
Let's trade beta-tests!
Well, I'm certainly not a fan Seira, or her type of story. Though, it seems to me that her outright abuse of the player could come forward more. Like, give the player a choice (bold intentional) between continuing to take her abuse, or throw her into the slammer. Choosing the former scenario will continue the story as you envisioned it (probably), while choosing the latter would lead to a "Seira locked!" scenario. However, I'm not sure if this whole "throw a juvenile into jail" is a viable story with the setting the game is supposed to have. It's a thought, anyway.
Anyway, I was beta-testing Fran along with Seira. I have yet to get Story 7, which has a PLACE = Bedroom line in it. It also has a CONDITION = Saturday line, so I'll be temporarily removing that to see if it works at all.
Anyway, I was beta-testing Fran along with Seira. I have yet to get Story 7, which has a PLACE = Bedroom line in it. It also has a CONDITION = Saturday line, so I'll be temporarily removing that to see if it works at all.
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so you aren't having trouble with story 5? it maybe because i keep getting to day 3 before i can get that one part and as for seira she's a maydere though i was trying for a yandere but she got so overly violent that it seemed more like a death thing then just trying to hurt him that i just went back and decided to go maydere all the way
author=triad2
so you aren't having trouble with story 5? it maybe because i keep getting to day 3 before i can get that one part and as for seira she's a maydere though i was trying for a yandere but she got so overly violent that it seemed more like a death thing then just trying to hurt him that i just went back and decided to go maydere all the way
I haven't the slightest clue what a "yandere" or a "maydere" is. I only know what I've experienced. And what I've experienced were situations that I'd wish upon no one.
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i will let vndb define those for you ok sorry i was going for yangire Yangire refers to characters who snap suddenly out of jealousy, irritation or something similar. This behavior is different from that of a yandere character in regard to the motivation that sparked the change in the character.
Mayadere Heroine
This type of a tsundere is dangerous and scary.
Think of a heroine that started as a villain trying to kill the protagonist but then switched to his side after falling in love with him. One that still makes jokes about killing him once in a while...
And sorry for not being more clear on the violence everyone has a past that the dont want to relive and i'm sorry that my charector brought that back up for you
Mayadere Heroine
This type of a tsundere is dangerous and scary.
Think of a heroine that started as a villain trying to kill the protagonist but then switched to his side after falling in love with him. One that still makes jokes about killing him once in a while...
And sorry for not being more clear on the violence everyone has a past that the dont want to relive and i'm sorry that my charector brought that back up for you
I think you mis-read me a bit. When I said "I only know what I've experienced." I meant to say that I only knew as much about the character as the experience of play that I had with the character. I didn't mean to come across saying that I had personal experience with such a person. That would certainly be a cause for social withdrawal, though...
Anyway, I never said I had problems with Story 5. Not error-probelms, or choice-issues. The probelms I was having, with the character as a whole, is that, I dunno, she seems to be able to get away with quite a bit of violence by threatening more violence on the player character. It never comes across <player>'s mind to give her a taste of her own medicine, or, the more honorible route, to talk to the authorities. There was a sequence I read (I didn't get this in-game) about being in front of a guidance counselor (or somebody like that), and having the choice to talk about the abuse she's done on him. This action obviously gets player on Seira's bad side (She has a good side?), and I'm not sure what the consequences of that action do to Seira. She's still in the game, as far as I can tell.
Anyway, I never said I had problems with Story 5. Not error-probelms, or choice-issues. The probelms I was having, with the character as a whole, is that, I dunno, she seems to be able to get away with quite a bit of violence by threatening more violence on the player character. It never comes across <player>'s mind to give her a taste of her own medicine, or, the more honorible route, to talk to the authorities. There was a sequence I read (I didn't get this in-game) about being in front of a guidance counselor (or somebody like that), and having the choice to talk about the abuse she's done on him. This action obviously gets player on Seira's bad side (She has a good side?), and I'm not sure what the consequences of that action do to Seira. She's still in the game, as far as I can tell.
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i meant i can't seem to get fran's 5 to work Seira is still a work in progress i still want to add a few more stories and tweak the ending a little bit and if you don't want to see her anymore the only way to make her disapear is to not visit the fashion mall i might add a bad ending i still have 12 hours off of work btw the higher her affections the less violent she is
You can't get Story 5 for Fran? The way it works at current incarnation, you need to have been introduced to Masako and Tsubasa first.
Which brings me to the point of forgetting to say that Masako and a disabled Clean Mode are requirements for this character. There's always something, eh?
Which brings me to the point of forgetting to say that Masako and a disabled Clean Mode are requirements for this character. There's always something, eh?
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oh ok i was reading it wrong then lol i thought you couldnt have been introduced to them first ok playing through this i realised that seira is no where near ready to be evaluated i need to sort too much out and i don't think i have time so i think it will be best just to scrap her and yoko what do you guys think?
If you need time to sort out what you want to do with Seira, Yoko, or whoever else you could be working on, that's fine! Scrapping a character should be a my-computer-blew-up-and-I-lost-all-my-work kind of thing. If you merely lost inspiration, I can assure you, it'll come back bludgeoning you in the face.
Re-uploaded Fran. I fixed up a few things, and I managed to get the bedroom event. We're still demoing this character, so please note that as you play her out. Both Masako and Tsubasa need to be active content for certain events to function. Until further notice, they also need to be introduced for Fran's story, such as it is, to unfold.
*Edit: You might want to wait and see what others have to say about Seira. I, for one, don't not like the character, and that could be blinding me with bias.
Re-uploaded Fran. I fixed up a few things, and I managed to get the bedroom event. We're still demoing this character, so please note that as you play her out. Both Masako and Tsubasa need to be active content for certain events to function. Until further notice, they also need to be introduced for Fran's story, such as it is, to unfold.
*Edit: You might want to wait and see what others have to say about Seira. I, for one, don't not like the character, and that could be blinding me with bias.
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just seira and yoko yoko is heavily inspired by a batman villian but the reason i'm scrapping them is this is my first day off in a month and instead of relaxing with a game or anime i'm working on seira it's not that i want to scrap them i hate leaving anything unfinished but if i get a few more people to review her and none like her i will scrap her and focus on fixing the problems i see with maeda including her extremely short story
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marrend i finnished fran and i like it so far i do have one suggestion though on the roof at the end masako says "This case... I fear it will be as simplistic as you think it will." i think won't be might be a better way to phrase that. not that i by any means should be correcting anyone else
