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Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
The game needs more proofreading. I can understand what's happening, but the grammar errors break the atmosphere. I'd be more than happy to help with the proofreading if you'd like.
The gameplay works fine since it's such a short game.
The art is really nice. I think the game would benefit more if there were more of it. I guess you could place some in diary flashbacks, family albums, or something. It'd be a lot of work but it'd be a nice touch.
Overall, I liked the game.
The gameplay works fine since it's such a short game.
The art is really nice. I think the game would benefit more if there were more of it. I guess you could place some in diary flashbacks, family albums, or something. It'd be a lot of work but it'd be a nice touch.
Overall, I liked the game.