Alice: The 1st Story
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Alice: The 1st Story

I played your demo... Nice! I liked it! So with the remaking what is your game progress? Are you going to release another demo or just the finished game?

I will only be releasing the finished game, so unfortunately there will be no new demo.

Progress wise, I will estimate it be about 20%.
The game will be divided into two or three acts and, since I'm doing everything alone, it's going to take quite some time; especially due to the 'quest' system.

Thanks for playing the demo!

Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl

The game needs more proofreading. I can understand what's happening, but the grammar errors break the atmosphere. I'd be more than happy to help with the proofreading if you'd like.

The gameplay works fine since it's such a short game.

The art is really nice. I think the game would benefit more if there were more of it. I guess you could place some in diary flashbacks, family albums, or something. It'd be a lot of work but it'd be a nice touch.

Overall, I liked the game.

Alice: The 1st Story

Your game's so pretty; I love everything about it!! X) The otome elements in it were so cute as well~

I'm glad you like it! Thank you for the comment.

Alice: The 1st Story

Just did my first video for my playthrough of the game. Not sure if I'm on the right path or not, but an amazing game so far! :)


Thanks for playing! I've watched the videos and enjoyed your commentary immensely.

In response to some questions you may have, this game features several optional areas and puzzles. The rewards for exploring are either affection points with your partner, an item to be used later on in the story, or just bits of lore.

The consequences of skipping these aren't big. They'll just be missed cutscenes or dialogue.

Again, thank you for playing~

Alice Demo 0.1.1 - 9/9/2015

This game looks really cool. Is is possible for me to do a let's play of the demo?

I don't mind at all.
If you happen to find any glitches or have any criticisms, please let me know.

Alice: The 1st Story

I love Alice, and I love everything in this game! It's just a demo but I already find it so much fun! Plus I love the otome elements. There's a lot I want to say but I don't know how to say it, I just know that this makes me super happy and that I wanna play more of it!

Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you like it!
I'll do my best to ensure that the final product is just as enjoyable and fun as the demo.

Moon Tree

Lovely game. I didn't even know the things in the dock area were ships, though.
I thought they were just barriers to help you hide.
The text was a bit hard to adjust to at first, but everything else was fine to me.
Nice job.

Alice: The 1st Story

Edit: Also, help with the flame puzzle pleease?? I know you have a walkthrough and I'm not sure if it applies to the new version but if it does, I don't understand the flame bit.

The walkthrough still applies. The story has to be put in the right order first.
One you know the order, figure out how many living characters remain at the end of each wisp's story. There is no 0 in the solution; only numbers are from 1-3.

Alice: The 1st Story

Okay, dumb question but I can't find Nayu anywhere! I think I checked all around the town in the places I could but maybe I missed him. Where is he supposed to be?

If you're playing the new version, you won't be able to find him at all in the town. The townspeople only mention that they last saw him in the woods.

Alice: The 1st Story

...Now for some reason I can't seem to make the crown of tulips, and bunny or whatever won't even respond to me trying to talk to him.

There's a new version of the game out where you should be able to do that.
In your version, you're forced to kill the Daisy by finding the Weed Killer.
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