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I made my first game using RPG Maker VX back in 2010, that is what first inspired me
to make games! It has been four years since then and I have graduated from Full Sail
University. I specialize in programming and scripting.
to make games! It has been four years since then and I have graduated from Full Sail
University. I specialize in programming and scripting.
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My Game:
Broken Seal
* Describe how you want your game to feel to other people.
Well as I made this back in 2010, this was my first game to be honest, I
have forgotten my original vision for this game. However, I now have a new
one. I want the game to be action-packed as I've drawn most of my inspiration
from anime like Dragon Ball Z. As for the characters I want them each to have
distinct personalities and be characters that people can relate to. I want the
story to be interesting, the player is placed in this setting that they
know little about, as they progress through the game the player will learn more
about the setting and the characters alike. For the gameplay I wanted
to go with something simple and easy to pick up, yet complex at the same time.
This is why I went for traditional systems instead of custom ones. I also want
to be able to support multiple types of play, some people are completionists and
others just like to rush through the game and complete the story. Due to this
I decided that player customization is an important feature for my game that
will make the experience more enjoyable for all players.
* Only submit polished games.
This game is playable I have tested it multiple times, there are no game
breaking bugs and very few grammatical errors.
* Let me know if you want a ranked review or just feedback (N/A rating).
I know that ranked reviews can make or break games, but sometimes a
bad review is better than no review. Not that my game is bad, lol.
I'm willing to take the risk and go for it. My goal is to make a game
that anyone can enjoy, with that in mind I want you to be as honest
a possible with your review. With your feedback I believe that will
help me achieve my goal.
* Include the length and maturity rating of the game.
The game is about 4-5 hours in length and that's just with me testing it, so I
am unsure of its true length. It can take up to 6-7 hours for the player to
complete depending on how they play the game. As for maturity, if I had to rate
the game I'd say its rated T. There is blood, violence and mature language
in this game.
Game Page: http://rpgmaker.net/games/6979/
RTP is not included I hope that isn't a problem.
Broken Seal
* Describe how you want your game to feel to other people.
Well as I made this back in 2010, this was my first game to be honest, I
have forgotten my original vision for this game. However, I now have a new
one. I want the game to be action-packed as I've drawn most of my inspiration
from anime like Dragon Ball Z. As for the characters I want them each to have
distinct personalities and be characters that people can relate to. I want the
story to be interesting, the player is placed in this setting that they
know little about, as they progress through the game the player will learn more
about the setting and the characters alike. For the gameplay I wanted
to go with something simple and easy to pick up, yet complex at the same time.
This is why I went for traditional systems instead of custom ones. I also want
to be able to support multiple types of play, some people are completionists and
others just like to rush through the game and complete the story. Due to this
I decided that player customization is an important feature for my game that
will make the experience more enjoyable for all players.
* Only submit polished games.
This game is playable I have tested it multiple times, there are no game
breaking bugs and very few grammatical errors.
* Let me know if you want a ranked review or just feedback (N/A rating).
I know that ranked reviews can make or break games, but sometimes a
bad review is better than no review. Not that my game is bad, lol.
I'm willing to take the risk and go for it. My goal is to make a game
that anyone can enjoy, with that in mind I want you to be as honest
a possible with your review. With your feedback I believe that will
help me achieve my goal.
* Include the length and maturity rating of the game.
The game is about 4-5 hours in length and that's just with me testing it, so I
am unsure of its true length. It can take up to 6-7 hours for the player to
complete depending on how they play the game. As for maturity, if I had to rate
the game I'd say its rated T. There is blood, violence and mature language
in this game.
Game Page: http://rpgmaker.net/games/6979/
RTP is not included I hope that isn't a problem.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Thanks again for your help and suggestions!
By the way, I like the way you re-worded my Story section so
I will take that into consideration.
Well, I'll make a few changes then, resubmit my game and hope for the best!
By the way, I like the way you re-worded my Story section so
I will take that into consideration.
Well, I'll make a few changes then, resubmit my game and hope for the best!
Let's work on your game descriptions!
The reason why I decided to omit the main character in my story description is
because you, as the player know more about the world than the main character, Rob, does. The game is much more plot-driven than character-driven. That and Rob knows
nothing about the World Wars or even being part of the Sacred Electric Clan to begin
with, which is hinted by the fact that he is only 17. As the player plays through
the game they will find out more about the Sacred Electric Clan and the Abyssal
Forces as well as the events that actually took place during the World Wars.
My main dilemma is that I am having a hard time being descriptive without giving
to much information to the viewer.
because you, as the player know more about the world than the main character, Rob, does. The game is much more plot-driven than character-driven. That and Rob knows
nothing about the World Wars or even being part of the Sacred Electric Clan to begin
with, which is hinted by the fact that he is only 17. As the player plays through
the game they will find out more about the Sacred Electric Clan and the Abyssal
Forces as well as the events that actually took place during the World Wars.
My main dilemma is that I am having a hard time being descriptive without giving
to much information to the viewer.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Thank you for your feedback! =]
The line breaks are probably a result of copy-pasting.
As for the main character, yep, you got me the lack of identity
for the main character is done on purpose.
Also, you may have already noticed that, this isn't my complete description.
I felt the issue was the lack of detail in my description, which is
something I can easily overlook due to me knowing the story already.
I only posted the story because I wanted to see how it is perceived
by my viewers.
Anyway here is my entire description:
-Background
This is a project that I worked on awhile back(2010).
I've recently found this game(2014), played it then I decided to finish it.
After coming back to this game with fresh eyes, I am no longer conditioned to
like my own game. I feel that it has potential but lacks polish.
-Story
Now, lets get to the story! The story is heavily inspired by anime like
Dragon Ball Z, Naruto, Bleach, Avatar the Last Airbender and One Piece, so you
can expect something of that nature as you play through the game. As the game is
episodic it is divided into parts, this being the 1st part. So the story can be
pretty linear with a few minor plot twists, nothing major here!
In the year 3007 a great War, known as the World Wars, took place between all of
the nations of this world and the Abyssal Forces. Lord Sean who was the leader of
the Abyssal Forces sought to rule over all of the nations! They brought
destruction to many Towns and Villages in order to achieve their goal. Nobody was
able to stand up to the might of the Abyssal Forces,except those from the Sacred
Electric Clan.
While the War continued to rage on the Great Sage of the Sacred Electric Clan
sacrificed his life to seal away Lord Sean in order to bring an end to these
World Wars. This was the beginning of the end for both the Sacred Electric Clan
and the Abyssal Forces!
17 years later(Year 3024) Lord Sean is freed from the seal the Great Sage placed
him in! However, Lord Sean's powers have not fully returned yet so he cannot
achieve his goal of controlling all of the nations, like he attempted to do
during the World Wars. In addition to that almost all of Abyssal Forces were
killed off. So a new recruit in the Abyssal Forces who is now known as the
Darklord is given a mission to retrieve the Nature Emerald, a vessel which
contains enormous power. Which can be used to grant Lord Sean his powers! Can you
prevent the Darklord from obtaining the Nature Emerald?
-Characters
*Rob
-Age 17
-He is the main protagonist of the game and one of the survivors from the Sacred
Electric Clan. He is a very logical person. Because of this he displays a calm
nature. He analyzes enemy tactics and uses that to his advantage.
*Tea'a
-Age 16
-Rob's younger sister, Tea'a is a kind-hearted, strong willed, brave and tough
warrior. She can be very emotional and short-tempered at times as well. She
overwhelms her enemies with brute strength and power.
*Master John
-Age ???
-One of the survivors from the Sacred Electric Clan, who fought against the
Abyssal Forces and survived. He is known to be the best teacher in the world, as
he trained many powerful warriors that were from the Sacred Electric Clan. He is
a mentor to both Rob and Tea'a, he also teaches them how to fend off the Abyssal
Forces.
*Darklord
-Age ??
-He is the main antagonist of the game.
He's short-tempered, power hungry, ruthless and very strong willed.
He was sent by Lord Sean in order to obtain the Nature Emerald.
-Features
*A Story that grips you from the start.
*Classic Sideview Battle System that is easy to adjust to
*Side Quests that do not distract from the story
*Customizable characters that can be built in various ways
*Tons of Skills that each character learns as they level up!(1 Skill per level)
*A Bestiary that gives various information on monsters.
*An estimated 10-12 hours of gameplay when complete(about 50% complete as of now)
-Planned features
*Ability to reset distribute points spent
*Optional areas and dungeons to explore
*More intelligent AI for a more challenging experience
*More weapons, armor and items to choose from
*Unlockables from completing challenging quests and/or dungeons
The line breaks are probably a result of copy-pasting.
As for the main character, yep, you got me the lack of identity
for the main character is done on purpose.
Also, you may have already noticed that, this isn't my complete description.
I felt the issue was the lack of detail in my description, which is
something I can easily overlook due to me knowing the story already.
I only posted the story because I wanted to see how it is perceived
by my viewers.
Anyway here is my entire description:
-Background
This is a project that I worked on awhile back(2010).
I've recently found this game(2014), played it then I decided to finish it.
After coming back to this game with fresh eyes, I am no longer conditioned to
like my own game. I feel that it has potential but lacks polish.
-Story
Now, lets get to the story! The story is heavily inspired by anime like
Dragon Ball Z, Naruto, Bleach, Avatar the Last Airbender and One Piece, so you
can expect something of that nature as you play through the game. As the game is
episodic it is divided into parts, this being the 1st part. So the story can be
pretty linear with a few minor plot twists, nothing major here!
In the year 3007 a great War, known as the World Wars, took place between all of
the nations of this world and the Abyssal Forces. Lord Sean who was the leader of
the Abyssal Forces sought to rule over all of the nations! They brought
destruction to many Towns and Villages in order to achieve their goal. Nobody was
able to stand up to the might of the Abyssal Forces,except those from the Sacred
Electric Clan.
While the War continued to rage on the Great Sage of the Sacred Electric Clan
sacrificed his life to seal away Lord Sean in order to bring an end to these
World Wars. This was the beginning of the end for both the Sacred Electric Clan
and the Abyssal Forces!
17 years later(Year 3024) Lord Sean is freed from the seal the Great Sage placed
him in! However, Lord Sean's powers have not fully returned yet so he cannot
achieve his goal of controlling all of the nations, like he attempted to do
during the World Wars. In addition to that almost all of Abyssal Forces were
killed off. So a new recruit in the Abyssal Forces who is now known as the
Darklord is given a mission to retrieve the Nature Emerald, a vessel which
contains enormous power. Which can be used to grant Lord Sean his powers! Can you
prevent the Darklord from obtaining the Nature Emerald?
-Characters
*Rob
-Age 17
-He is the main protagonist of the game and one of the survivors from the Sacred
Electric Clan. He is a very logical person. Because of this he displays a calm
nature. He analyzes enemy tactics and uses that to his advantage.
*Tea'a
-Age 16
-Rob's younger sister, Tea'a is a kind-hearted, strong willed, brave and tough
warrior. She can be very emotional and short-tempered at times as well. She
overwhelms her enemies with brute strength and power.
*Master John
-Age ???
-One of the survivors from the Sacred Electric Clan, who fought against the
Abyssal Forces and survived. He is known to be the best teacher in the world, as
he trained many powerful warriors that were from the Sacred Electric Clan. He is
a mentor to both Rob and Tea'a, he also teaches them how to fend off the Abyssal
Forces.
*Darklord
-Age ??
-He is the main antagonist of the game.
He's short-tempered, power hungry, ruthless and very strong willed.
He was sent by Lord Sean in order to obtain the Nature Emerald.
-Features
*A Story that grips you from the start.
*Classic Sideview Battle System that is easy to adjust to
*Side Quests that do not distract from the story
*Customizable characters that can be built in various ways
*Tons of Skills that each character learns as they level up!(1 Skill per level)
*A Bestiary that gives various information on monsters.
*An estimated 10-12 hours of gameplay when complete(about 50% complete as of now)
-Planned features
*Ability to reset distribute points spent
*Optional areas and dungeons to explore
*More intelligent AI for a more challenging experience
*More weapons, armor and items to choose from
*Unlockables from completing challenging quests and/or dungeons
Let's work on your game descriptions!
I have recently attempted to post my game I've been working on and was
denied due to a bad description. Can someone look over this?
Thanks in advance!
In the year 3007 a great War, known as the World Wars, took place between all of the nations
of this world and the Abyssal Forces. Lord Sean who was the leader of the Abyssal Forces
sought to rule over all of the nations! They brought destruction to many Towns and Villages
in order to achieve their goal. Nobody was able to stand up to the might of the Abyssal Forces,
except those from the Sacred Electric Clan.
While the War continued to rage on the Great Sage of the Sacred Electric Clan sacrificed
his life to seal away Lord Sean in order to bring an end to these World Wars. This was
the beginning of the end for both the Sacred Electric Clan and the Abyssal Forces!
17 years later(Year 3024) Lord Sean is freed from the seal the Great Sage placed
him in! However, Lord Sean's powers have not fully returned yet so he cannot achieve his
goal of controlling all of the nations, like he attempted to do during the World Wars.
In addition to that almost all of Abyssal Forces were killed off. So a new recruit in the
Abyssal Forces who is now known as the Darklord is given a mission to retrieve the
Nature Emerald, a vessel which contains enormous power. Which can be used to grant Lord Sean
his powers! Can you prevent the Darklord from obtaining the Nature Emerald?
denied due to a bad description. Can someone look over this?
Thanks in advance!
In the year 3007 a great War, known as the World Wars, took place between all of the nations
of this world and the Abyssal Forces. Lord Sean who was the leader of the Abyssal Forces
sought to rule over all of the nations! They brought destruction to many Towns and Villages
in order to achieve their goal. Nobody was able to stand up to the might of the Abyssal Forces,
except those from the Sacred Electric Clan.
While the War continued to rage on the Great Sage of the Sacred Electric Clan sacrificed
his life to seal away Lord Sean in order to bring an end to these World Wars. This was
the beginning of the end for both the Sacred Electric Clan and the Abyssal Forces!
17 years later(Year 3024) Lord Sean is freed from the seal the Great Sage placed
him in! However, Lord Sean's powers have not fully returned yet so he cannot achieve his
goal of controlling all of the nations, like he attempted to do during the World Wars.
In addition to that almost all of Abyssal Forces were killed off. So a new recruit in the
Abyssal Forces who is now known as the Darklord is given a mission to retrieve the
Nature Emerald, a vessel which contains enormous power. Which can be used to grant Lord Sean
his powers! Can you prevent the Darklord from obtaining the Nature Emerald?
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