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Bronze Soul
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You should, because it doesn't help that you've been hinting at it, a not have a gamepage for it.
lol, I like keeping people in suspense. Besides, I'm not quite sure how it's gonna come out. If I did put up a game page, I wouldn't do a demo. I'd have people test the finished game first though. So, if you want me to stop hinting at it I will :) I might change this for the future, but for now I'm not putting one up.
Bronze Soul
Good for both of you, it's always good to make progress (now I'm feeling like I should make a gamepage for my 50 % completed project)
:)
:)
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It's not that the grammar was strange, just the idea of the text (You do a great job for English not being your first language)
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Why not do this, tell the player the original name, and then ask them if they want to change it or not.
Skill Books.
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I agree with everythiing Crystal gate said, especially the Show parts. You should really work on the character motives with He who turned evil :)
Also, you should change some of the dialouge when Zillien kills the king and guards. It makes it sound like he is unsure of what he has done himself. It was wierd the way the part where he accuses Banias is worded
Also, you should change some of the dialouge when Zillien kills the king and guards. It makes it sound like he is unsure of what he has done himself. It was wierd the way the part where he accuses Banias is worded














