LUSTY'S PROFILE

Thanks for the response guys, i put it in rapidshare because to long if i put it here. But after reading your comment about the dialogue i think i need to find new guy to help me.

- cilence
i'm from indonesia and i only learn basic of English. And for statement like "smack those guard" won't be used in dialogue so i don't fix them.

- Silently
Thanks for your time to edit it :D, it;s okay about the indication in change you made, i will try to compare it with the original text.

Thank you very much guys.
This can be considered done.

Sorry fo distrubing :D

First i must tell you that I'm bad at English and some people who played my game said it to, there lot of grammar error in the game. So in order to fix that i asked someone to edit my dialogue and he already finished, the main problem i don't know if he do a good job or not.

So my request is can anyone helped me to read his work and tell me if he do a good job or not?
Thank you very much.

At least you post the game here Garde :D

Update
New battler


New Faceset


New town



New NPC template

That town will be edited, sketch and artwork can be used in menu and cutscene for battle, also they can make game finished (my inspiration)