OMCIFER'S PROFILE

First of all, as I said, your game is great so far. There haven't been many issues. One qualm I have is the dialogue, it seems sort of "cheesy". I'm not really sure if that's the correct term, but i'll explain. Now, I am JUST leaving the citadel area, so I don't know if the dialogue is consistent with what i've heard so far or not. Anyhow, looking back at the conversation between Slade and Shadar, it seems that they aren't natural when they speak. They seem to be too formal....or something. It's a little tough to convey what I think. They kind of try to hard, too rigid, and not very natural. Here, i'll give you an example:

Person A: "How dare you disturb my people."
People B: "Don't confront me, you fool."
Person A: "You shall pay for what you have
done."
Person B: "Prepare to perish under my
might."

Do you sort of see where I am coming from here? This isn't an excerpt for your game, but the underlying principle should still be there. Maybe if I changed it, you will see how it's different.

Person A: "You killed the people of Auburn,
and you feel as if it's all ok.
You're nothing but a cold,
heartless killer."
Person B: "Please, they deserved the death
that I gave them. This planet
has no more space for worthless
human beings."
Person A: "What this planet has no room for
is the pain, hatred, and grief
that you supply it with. I will
advenge the innocent lives that
you have taken."
Person B: "If you are stupid enough to confront
me like this, then you deserve to die.
My "fun" with the worthless inhabitants
of this planet have caused you pain. I'll
do you a favor, and end your suffering."

This seems a bit more natural. Maybe someone here can help me a little on what I mean.
Otherwise, great game so far! I look forward to playing more.