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The name's RitoJS.
Regular player and J-RPG lover/maker who can't live without ice tea.
I like cute things and i'm a big Falcom fan.
Lumina
A small VX Ace project

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Let's work on your game descriptions!

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Let's work on your game descriptions!

Hello,
I need some help with my game description.
I thought my english improved since Lumina, but I still have some issues.
Could you help me with them ?
One day, a young woman woke in a strange place.
Every thing was bright and peaceful, the nature was luxurious but she was alone and had no idea when and how she ended up there…Until she heard a women voice.
Guided by her, this voice appear to be from a woman who claim to be “Elena” the guardian of the “Paradise Lost”, a place whose purpose is to give a second chance to few humans to came back to life by realising few task…And that’s the place where our young woman ended up. To make thing worse, aside from being dead she also noticed that she suffer from amnesia…She lost all of her memories aside from her name: Mathilde. A detail that was not supposed to happen according to Elena.
But for her that’s another reason for Mathilde to fulfill her task: “Cure Iris”
Although she have no idea what that mean and how she can do that, she’s still set to make this task a success while trying to regain her memory loss…Or maybe even more than that…

Thanks for helping me !
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