SOULSMINDPALACE'S PROFILE

author=OzzyTheOne
Welp, I finished playing the game and it was a fun and interesting experience! The story is absolutely its main strength but I also like all of the dialogue of the different characters and you made good use of the Khas Ultra Lighting script. The art by NIWA was also very damn good and the puzzles were also fun. All in all, a pretty decent game and I'm glad I was finally able to play the finished version!

I could go into more detail, but I don't want to spoil anything for future players ;)

Best of luck with any future projects!

Thank you so much, I am happy you liked the game ;;

I'm honestly excited to start a new project some time in the future and use a the things I learned during this one.

author=KazukiT126
I finished the game, it definitely sad what actually happened. You definitely did a job on this game considering its your first.

I am so glad you had a good time, thank you!
Hopefully I'll continue to improve :)

author=Waddami
I loved the ending! Great job, especially for a first try at a horror game!
However, I encountered one more bug that bricked my save file (thankfully, I had an older save file set aside so I didn't lose too much time, ahaha).

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I went into the bar's restroom before I acquired the old radio, and I couldn't go back into said restroom afterward, making me unable to progress any further.

Aaah thanks! I'm so happpy people are enjoying my first game. That honestly means a lot.

Thanks for letting me know about the bug!
I looked at it - and it should be fixed now. I'm uploading the newest download right now.

author=KazukiT126
I just played your game and I like the art and the air of mystery. However, there is some text that gets cut off and the buildings seems too big compared to the sprites.

Thank you so much for your feedback!
I'll keep the size of houses in mind for my next game. To be completely honest, I am not very experienced with mapping, so this is really helpful. I will do better next time!
Did you install the font "Asparagus Sprouts" in the folder Fonts2? If not, that might be the cause of the cut-off text.

author=KazukiT126
One suggestion I could make to the game’s progression is to make the buildings that don’t have anything to do with the current objective inaccessible to help streamline exploration. I got as far as getting the keys for the car in the bar. After giving the keys to him the game softlocks as he sits in mid-air when he probably was supposed to leave the bar.

I completely understand where you are coming from, but the whole point of it was for the exploration to not be linear. There was supposed to be a tiny sense of being lost and confused (although hopfefully not to the point of frustration) cause that is how Haru feels in this situation.
Also thanks for letting me know about the bug! I'll fix it as soon as possible!


Edit (21/5/21): I fixed the bug, version 1.1 is available for download. Thank you!

author=awakenedfaith182
The game looks interesting, looking forward for when a download becomes available.

Thank you, I'm so happy you're interested!

I am glad to see that you used the criticism you got to improve!
I played the "original" version and I'm definitely going to check out this one.

I think this looks awesome!
I'll definitely keep an eye on this.