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I'm a french computer science and matematics student, and I love to create video games when I have time to spare. I'm interested in all parts of game making, and particulary in game programing. I also do many graphics, but it's not my favorite part.
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Hey ! I'm actually making a mini game on android and I'd like to know if RMN allowed to put it in our games list. I'm not sure whether RMN is appropriate for that kind of engine.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Yeah that's better, frozen is more significant than stopped. Thank you, I submit that right know !
Edit : Yay it has been accepted ! Thanks a lot for your help. :)
Edit : Yay it has been accepted ! Thanks a lot for your help. :)
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Thank you very much for your answers !
Didn't know, sorry.
I like your new characters' description, sold ! For the third, it wasn't offensive at all in my point of view, I wrote the description after drawing that artwork :
But in the game, there absolutlely is'nt any comment about her bust, so you are right that's an useless remark for the description. Maybe I should write that she is just really intelligent in the end, I think Marrend calmed it well.
In order to answer to both of you, "disturbed by the time" means that the time is stopped in certain places called "temporal places" here. People, animals, objects, and every single thing can't move, that's just stopped. I see that I need to be more accurate about this in the description now.
Let's try with Marrend's edit :
"The story is about two ten-year-old kids, Kyomaru and Midori. In this world, the time is stopped in many places, and everybody has black hair, with few exceptions. These exceptions are called "Kotonaru". The disturbances aren't safe for normal people, but, for Kotonarus, they are able to survive and to access certain powers that only exist when they are in close proximity to these disturbances."
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The project link will not appear public to anyone else but you, since it has not been approved.
Didn't know, sorry.
I like your new characters' description, sold ! For the third, it wasn't offensive at all in my point of view, I wrote the description after drawing that artwork :
But in the game, there absolutlely is'nt any comment about her bust, so you are right that's an useless remark for the description. Maybe I should write that she is just really intelligent in the end, I think Marrend calmed it well.
In order to answer to both of you, "disturbed by the time" means that the time is stopped in certain places called "temporal places" here. People, animals, objects, and every single thing can't move, that's just stopped. I see that I need to be more accurate about this in the description now.
Let's try with Marrend's edit :
"The story is about two ten-year-old kids, Kyomaru and Midori. In this world, the time is stopped in many places, and everybody has black hair, with few exceptions. These exceptions are called "Kotonaru". The disturbances aren't safe for normal people, but, for Kotonarus, they are able to survive and to access certain powers that only exist when they are in close proximity to these disturbances."
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Helloo !
I'm french and i'd like to present my project to the community, buuut I've got some grammatical problems with English and I trully need your help to improve it. xD
Here is a link to my project : http://rpgmaker.net/games/7581/
I think I have most important promblems in the story (deliberately short):
And main characters' description :
If you can see other problems somewhere else, please don't hesitate to notice it !
Thanks for your help. :)
I'm french and i'd like to present my project to the community, buuut I've got some grammatical problems with English and I trully need your help to improve it. xD
Here is a link to my project : http://rpgmaker.net/games/7581/
I think I have most important promblems in the story (deliberately short):
The story is about ten years old kids, Kyomaru and Midori, in a world which is disturbed by the time for a few days. In this world, everybody have black hair exept a tiny part of the population, they are called "Kotonaru". Temporal places aren't safe, and only the Kotonarus are able to overcome that curse thanks to magic powers they only have in these places.
And main characters' description :
Kyomaru is really lazy, but he quickly give in to the whims of others. However, he is brave for sure, he wouldn't hesitate to protect a foe. In the adventure, he can't let Midori alone.
Midori is naive and authoritarian : if she wants something, she'll get it. Without knowing fear, she uses a katana to protect herself. She master a lot of weapons like spears, axes, and daggers.
Romada is a yound alchemist. She is studying Science since her childhood, that's the reason why her intelligence is as large as her bust size. She is crude and often compared to a demon, there are a lot of treason stories about her.
If you can see other problems somewhere else, please don't hesitate to notice it !
Thanks for your help. :)
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