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It might help those who aren't from a Welsh background, or don't know how to find an English=>Cymraeg translator.My maternal grandmother was Welsh, and a native speaker so that may be why Enelysion feels familiar. One of the weirdest experiences of my life has to be when I was visiting Argentina and I ended up in Patagonia and I heard Welsh being spoken. Seems a group of Welsh colonialists arrived in the 19th century and stayed. There's a little enclave of Wales half a world away from Cardiff, it's bizarre.
Arcanium
OK so first thoughts and I mean literally first, you need to darken the intro music, it's too upbeat for the story you are telling. You also need a proof reader, there are quite a few grammatical errors, including incorrect word usage, misplaced commas, and incomplete or incoherent sentences in the intro. I'd suggest you could reduce the timing, not the scroll speed, that's fine, but the time gap between the blocks of text are too long.
Don't offer a character for selection who isn't available in the demo, it's irritating for the player and as currently set up is not gender equal. A little message box saying 'Characters 2, 5 & 6 are not available.' will alleviate that problem.
I really like the custom graphics, they work well and appear consistent which is always difficult.
However there is a game crash after the first battle with the following error message
Script 'Animated battlers' line 2611 nomethoderror occurred. Undefined method 'call-pose' for #<Game_Enemy:0x357a960>.
So I cannot continue.
e: I went back after a while and replayed and I got through the battle this time. Error did not repeat, so I'm going to finish the demo. When I do would you prefer feedback via posts or would you like me to do a review for the current game?
Don't offer a character for selection who isn't available in the demo, it's irritating for the player and as currently set up is not gender equal. A little message box saying 'Characters 2, 5 & 6 are not available.' will alleviate that problem.
I really like the custom graphics, they work well and appear consistent which is always difficult.
However there is a game crash after the first battle with the following error message
Script 'Animated battlers' line 2611 nomethoderror occurred. Undefined method 'call-pose' for #<Game_Enemy:0x357a960>.
So I cannot continue.
e: I went back after a while and replayed and I got through the battle this time. Error did not repeat, so I'm going to finish the demo. When I do would you prefer feedback via posts or would you like me to do a review for the current game?
Vol II Update
Vol II Update
Oh gods, you can't state afflict him at all. Please tell me the woobie is back by then, I'm going to need his light spells.
Vol II Update
Nah, that make it sound like you are being attacked by a sentient, though deceased, scythe rather than a reaper/death/thanatos figure.
World Remade
History of Solest, well that's got to be a winner. I may have to replay MotW before it though just so I catch all the references.
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Sunken Spire
Vol II Update
I like Death on Two Legs (both the graphic and the name) though given the length of that scythe I'm thinking he's overcompensating :).
Woobie's back, and alls right with the world.
Woobie's back, and alls right with the world.













