RABITZ'S PROFILE

rabitZ
amusing tassadar, your taste in companionship grows ever more inexplicable
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I like computer RPGs, Strategy Games and Soccer!
I have 25 years, and I have a Licentiate degree in Electronics.

I grew up on games like Daggerfall, Might&Magic2 : Gates to Another World, Betrayal at Krondor, Master of Magic, Age of Wonders, the C&C series, the Age of Empires series, the Warcraft series, the Baldur's Gate series, the Diablo series.
Also SNES ones like Tactics Ogre, Fire Emblem (1,3,4,5, and the Gameboy ones: 6,7,8), Chrono Trigger, Romancing Saga...
ok, actually a lot more games but you get the idea haha.
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Legacy of the Guilds
Follow the journey of a young fighter to defend his homeland. (Genre: Classic Fantasy RPG)

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comment=40463
So you walk in that house and you are in the fireplace? =P
Maybe change where the chimney comes out.


HAHA! You're right! Good Call, I wasn't paying much attention. I'll fix that.

Bronze Soul

comment=40451
UPDATE: Old screenshots have been deleted at RabitZ request.


You still have a nice collections of screenshots there :)
Keep it up! Constant improvement is the goal

No_Entry.PNG

you should delete the old, outdated screenshots.
things can get confusing for some people. i.e. they don't know which screenshot is the correct version.

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I like this better than the previous version.

Demo v0.02 posted!

comment=40406
I would if it weren't for the fact that it is a rar file. :(


Ok. I posted a self-extractable .exe version of the same demo. At this moment it's pending.
Let me know if you have any more trouble with it -- Hopefully not! =)

Demo v0.02 posted!

Thanks, MKID232! Don't know if you had the chance to play the first demo.
If you find the time to play this, I'll be open to any suggestions you may have.

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have you tried changing the part where it says 'Scope:' to "none" in the Items tab of the Database editor?

DOING IT! - WEEK TWELVE - Dialogue

post=152365
Yeah, you do tend to overuse ellipses rabitZ.


Yeah... I kinda see the trouble with the ellipses, now that it's been pointed out. I shall have to comb my entire game for instances like this.

I agree with your note about Selena. She's a character from Noish's past and this is the first mention of her in the game. He still loves her and doesn't like to talk about her, since she doesn't love him back. Their relationship is kinda awkward. Mansel doesn't like her because she strung him along and the gives Noish the "let's be friends" speech. But that should be explored in the final part of the game. (that was kinda of a spoiler there, hehe... But it's not that important plot-wise. Character-wise I think it's more important.)

Mansel's final "..." was exactly that, a reaction to Noish's disapproval of his comment about Selena. But he is indeed a funny, easygoing guy, as slashphoenix figured out, so I don't know how appropiate it is for him.

Thank you for your comments, ElectricalKat!

If anyone else likes to add anything, please do so!

DOING IT! - WEEK TWELVE - Dialogue

post=152362
It all seems to be very in character (from what I can see) except for Mansel's last "..." only because Mansel comes off as the kind of guy who talks at every opportunity, and would take that chance to say something funny or sarcastic.

I like the characters though, you can tell their first-glance personalities pretty well from that convo.


hey! you know my characters better than me already! :)
you're right... That last "..." is not all that adeaquate.

Thanks!

DOING IT! - WEEK TWELVE - Dialogue

post=152356
There are... a lot of ellipses in there, Rabitz. I overuse them too and just combed my dialogue to try and replace them, but it's hard to not overuse them.


Ok! I see what you mean...
I thought that what bothered people was slow text speed and ellipses that stopped the text and forced you to press enter to continue reading. I'll look into my text then. Thanks!

Also, ignoring the ellipses for a moment... What about the quality of the words itself? Does the idea get across?