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Quick question: When you guys fought Brian, did you one-shot him?

EDIT: I just realized...I haven't picked a gender for Kitty!

Yes... I one-shotted him... I don't know if that's intentional...

Hello! This is a piece of dialogue for my game, and I don't know how good it its now. English isn't my native language, and though I am somewhat proficient in it, I tend to make some mistakes.

The game it's a classic, cliche, fantasy medieval RPG...
This dialogue happens between the two main party members after a boss fight, and it's supposed to give a brief insight of the main character's (Noish) past.
I would appreciate any opinions... Thanks!

*Orc Dies, and the game exits the battle screen*

Mansel:
Who would've thought we'd be fighting
Orcs, huh?... I can't wait to tell my mom
about this!... She'll never believe it!

Noish:
Come on, Mansel... This is no game...
We could have died...

Mansel:
You know, Noish... You're such a whiner,
yet at the same time you're a pretty good
fighter... Strange, huh?

Noish:
A whiner!?... Yeah, I guess I am... Maybe
that's why Selena never fell for me...

Mansel:
... Or maybe because she's just a bitch!

Noish:
...... Allright... Let's just take this orc skull
to the Warden at Eastwick. Hopefully the
murders will stop now.

Mansel:
...

Cool! I beat them allright... But I had bought like 18 healing potions! They saved my butt :)

ok! i just played the demo... here's my impressions:

1. I believe there's a bug in which if you change Diana's name at the beginning, afterwards it just reverts back to Diana. This happened to me in my game also... I believe the solution is to change the name AFTER you added the character to your party in the event.

2. I also found a bug in the city after you are in Deralia. When you press enter in the city gates, it says that you don't have permission to leave the city without your parents, and then my character freezes in place. But I can still access the menu and quit, etc. And the rest of events still keep moving... It's just me that freezes.

3. Ok, about the game now... I like the idea, and I like the character of kitty!!!... Everything flowed well with the story, in my opinion.

4. The maps are lacking some life and polish, but I believe you'll improve constantly with time...

5. All the enemies were ridiculously weak in comparison to your character, I don't know if that's intentional or just my impression...

So! keep it up... was nice playing the demo, albeit it was a bit short.

thanks for the opinions people!
I guess I'll leave thing like deciding title screens for when the game is near completion :)