UTANIMO'S PROFILE

Your story has a nice beginning and holds the potential become a lovely story.
It reminds me of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland.

“Also, the text was oftentimes cut off when I played. I could still figure out what they were saying, but it did detract from the experience.”

I also hit this issue, it can be serious.
The system reads the default font setting of the user's pc rather than your own pc.
(I met a same problem in my story, and later I make some changes...)

Add the following to your "main" script

Font.default_name = "Times New Roman"
Font.default_size = 24

Hope it can help you :)