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1st archived artistic content creation thread. For the active thread, click here.
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author=Dozen
I smell someone framing Takuya in Fran's route... How's my nose?
Not intentional, but there's always the unknown, isn't there?
author=triad2
Marrend, I finished Fran, and I like it so far. I do have one suggestion though. On the roof at the end, Masako says, "This case... I fear it will be as simplistic as you think it will." I think "won't" be might be a better way to phrase that. Not that I, by any means, should be correcting anyone else!
Derp! I fixed the Masako-line on my end to be, "This case... I fear it will not be as simplistic as you think it will be." Unless there's something else, however, I feel no need to update at this time.
author=triad2
ok that's cool i didn't know if you intended it to be optimistic or something else
Optimists are those with a tendency to always look on the bright side of life.
triad2
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if anyone wants to try to fix seira i give my full permission and consent and wave all credit to her i think i know how to fix her and will upload a more updated version when i get home if someone could beta test her to make sure there arent any errors and that all the stories line up i would appreciate it.
triad2
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here she is can someone please test her i sm going to bed
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
DISCLAIMER:
She is a mayadere which means she is actively trying to kill you, and even here dere side is more tsun then dere. So if you do not want to watch the player get painful assassinated do not play. also there is strong language though I did try to stay away from the f bomb, oh and there are a few places where she wears a bikini. To recap VIOLENCE STRONG LANGUAGE and BIKINI.
Edit: I promise dozen an updated story as soon as i got home so here it is i am headed to bed
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
DISCLAIMER:
She is a mayadere which means she is actively trying to kill you, and even here dere side is more tsun then dere. So if you do not want to watch the player get painful assassinated do not play. also there is strong language though I did try to stay away from the f bomb, oh and there are a few places where she wears a bikini. To recap VIOLENCE STRONG LANGUAGE and BIKINI.
Edit: I promise dozen an updated story as soon as i got home so here it is i am headed to bed
Story 1 INTRODUCE = 27 PLACE = Hall B JUMP A BRANCH A PLACE = None ID = 0 (I wish the teacher would either get his own supplies, or send someone other then me. I can hardly see over these boxes) ID = Takuya Be careful you might run into someone. ID = 0 You think I want to carry all these boxes. You know you could help me out by grabbing a couple. ID = Takuya You know i can't do that the teacher would give us both detention for a year. Besides how am I to open the doors for you if I am holding boxes. ID = 0 (Great I ran into someone.) ID = ??? You just ruined my new uniform! You are going to pay me back with your life! JUMP B
Dozen
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Hello again, artist thread!
I've been trying to try something (yet again) different, and Arika happened:
Hugs?
Arika, first high, is innocent, pure and wait no she's Hungarian, nevermind.
Got yer wallet!
(I really hope I won't get that much controversy for encouraging stereotypes...)
So anyway, since I'm nto so deeply invested in her, I might...hnngh... be able to...haerrr... release her without everything in it's place. Must not give in to perfectionism!
I've been trying to try something (yet again) different, and Arika happened:
Hugs?
Arika, first high, is innocent, pure and wait no she's Hungarian, nevermind.
Got yer wallet!
(I really hope I won't get that much controversy for encouraging stereotypes...)
So anyway, since I'm nto so deeply invested in her, I might...hnngh... be able to...haerrr... release her without everything in it's place. Must not give in to perfectionism!
This is kinda both an "artistic" issue and a "technical" issue. Whatever. I'll just drop it.
With Fran, I've been thinking of playing with the "PICTURE" feature we now have. What I've been looking at is "SnowTown01" from the XP RTP (Close-enough reference). The issue with this is that the picture's original size is 640 x 320, rather than the 640 x 480 that would be needed. Simply stretching that picture to be 640 x 480 is just icky. I had the idea of incorporating a snow battle background from VX Ace, but that didn't look quite right either. Currently, I'm looking into other options I can do that would make this be 640 x 480, but still look natural.
On the other hand, the importance of the story linked to this whole ordeal can be told another way. It's not a huge priority that I get this. So, a viable alternative would be to just forget about it, and not mess with this. Opinions?
With Fran, I've been thinking of playing with the "PICTURE" feature we now have. What I've been looking at is "SnowTown01" from the XP RTP (Close-enough reference). The issue with this is that the picture's original size is 640 x 320, rather than the 640 x 480 that would be needed. Simply stretching that picture to be 640 x 480 is just icky. I had the idea of incorporating a snow battle background from VX Ace, but that didn't look quite right either. Currently, I'm looking into other options I can do that would make this be 640 x 480, but still look natural.
On the other hand, the importance of the story linked to this whole ordeal can be told another way. It's not a huge priority that I get this. So, a viable alternative would be to just forget about it, and not mess with this. Opinions?
One idea could be to draw in a railing or fence or something for the 160 height of pixels you still need.
Btw, that link isn't working.
Btw, that link isn't working.
author=flowerthief
One idea could be to draw in a railing or fence or something for the 160 height of pixels you still need.
Perhaps I'm taking this to mean something completely different than your intention, but wouldn't drawing in a railing/fence would still require that I have a similar ground pattern to the rest of the picture?
Btw, that link isn't working.
Odd. It works for me. Does the image tag work?
triad2
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you could draw in a brick wall
EDIT: i think i might be able to do something with that tomorrow i have about 2 hours free time tomorrow and seira is fixed tested and rared i just didnt have time to upload her before i had to go to work no garuntees though
EDIT: i think i might be able to do something with that tomorrow i have about 2 hours free time tomorrow and seira is fixed tested and rared i just didnt have time to upload her before i had to go to work no garuntees though
triad2
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here is 3 posts real quick first is seira the mayadere mostly tested meaning i played through and got about 75 of her story
DISCLAIMER:
She is a mayadere which means she is actively trying to kill you, and even here dere side is more tsun then dere. So if you do not want to watch the player get painful assassinated do not play. also there is strong language though I did try to stay away from the f bomb, oh and there are a few places where she wears a bikini. To recap VIOLENCE STRONG LANGUAGE and BIKINI. she needs v 2.2 and it doesent matter if you play with clean mode on or off but off gives you a chance to get a few extra stories.
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
second and thirdly is yokos tachie and a preview using her lovesick tachie she was meant to be a happy go lucky evil genius that could give even tsubasa a run for her money but you may do with her as you wish i spent a lot of time and effort on her tachie so please be gentle and i hope someone puts it to good use
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Yoko.rar
and yes dozen if someone wants they can make her a chimera
@ marrend sorry but that scene is a bit smaller then i thought it would be if you could link me to the original i might be able to help you but i only have about 3 hours before i have to be back at work
DISCLAIMER:
She is a mayadere which means she is actively trying to kill you, and even here dere side is more tsun then dere. So if you do not want to watch the player get painful assassinated do not play. also there is strong language though I did try to stay away from the f bomb, oh and there are a few places where she wears a bikini. To recap VIOLENCE STRONG LANGUAGE and BIKINI. she needs v 2.2 and it doesent matter if you play with clean mode on or off but off gives you a chance to get a few extra stories.
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
second and thirdly is yokos tachie and a preview using her lovesick tachie she was meant to be a happy go lucky evil genius that could give even tsubasa a run for her money but you may do with her as you wish i spent a lot of time and effort on her tachie so please be gentle and i hope someone puts it to good use
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Yoko.rar
and yes dozen if someone wants they can make her a chimera
@ marrend sorry but that scene is a bit smaller then i thought it would be if you could link me to the original i might be able to help you but i only have about 3 hours before i have to be back at work
Dozen
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Gonna check both out soon, Triad!:)
Also! I feel kind of bad playing the big guy when I still haven't showed up with anything, so I'll put effort into smaller projects. Such as the Uchioniko Expansion! What do you think of this, Marrend? Your mallet or whatzit wacked it at me today:
STORY 16
CONDITION = 12 LOVE
CONDITION = 5 DONE
PLACE = Courtyard
ID = 12
Yo, <player>.
SHOW CENTER
ID = 0
Hi yourself. Looking for me?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
You wish, you per-
NEUTRAL
:sigh: Sorry, reflex. I am. <b>This</b> time.
ID = 0
That's a pleasant suprise.
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
Savor it. Ya gonna be like that, it won't happen again.
ID = 0
Heh, okay. What would you like?
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
To give you this.
ID = 0
(Mayu hands me what looks like... a lunchbox?!)
You're giving me lunch?!
(This is just about the last thing I'd expect from Mayu. Or anyone.)
ID = 12
Well, duh. You're my partner. I gotta keep you in shape if we want to win matches.
And I bet you punk don't pay attention to your diet. This might taste worse than the crap your throat usually has to put up with, but it's good for you.
ID = 0
(I wonder if this really is her reason...)
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
So? Will you take the damn thing or should I stand here and wait for your excellency?
ID = 0
Uh, right!
(Calm down, <player>. Just be thankful nobody's staring at the two of you yet.)
(I take the box from her and open it. It feels warm in my hand. I can't tell kind of food's in it, but it smells nice.)
But... You could have just given me a recipe or something. Why cook for me?
...
ID = 0
...
ID = 12
LOVE
Ehm...
NEUTRAL
'Cuz.
ID = 0
'Cuz why?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
'Cuz 'If you won't shut up and try it I'll shove it down yer big mouth and pull it out of your ass'!
UNFRIENDLY
ID = 0
Fine, fine.
(I take a bite. It seems like some sort of mea-)
MUSIC = none
(... This. This food.)
ID = 12
What? What the hell is with that stupid face of yours? It looks more retarded than usual.
NEUTRAL
ID = 0
MUSIC = happy
...This... This stuff is fantastic! When did you learn to cook so well?
ID = 12
You mess with me? I'm the worst this side of Osaka!
ID = 0
No, I mean it! I wish my Mom cooked food half this tasty!
(I talk with my mouth half full. Not that I can help it. I can't have enough of Mayu's masterpiece.)
ID = 12
LOVE
Um, well, I, I'm really bad at it most of the time, but I, uhh, have a thing for, hrm, well, the hot stuff.
ID = 0
The hot stuff?
ID = 12
Yeah, the hot stuff. Like, hot dishes. You've got to use fire and everything. That might be why this turned out good.
# References!
If, if it is, I mean. It really is?
ID = 0
It really is.
ID = 12
Nah, you're just pulling one over me! Bet even you could do better with your eyes closed.
ID = 0
Me? As if! I would't be able to prepare anything short of a sandwich to save my life.
ID = 12
Then...
# This would be the part where the girl offers the boy to cook for him every day, but since Mayu realizes that she's... khm... Mayu, and who's she talking to, she twists it a wee bit.
NEUTRAL
...
ID = 0
What is it?
ID = 12
...
DISLIKE
MUSIC = Uchioniko/sots-mio.mp3
If you can't cook, then the hell should I hand out recipes to you, you moron?!
ID = 0
Wh-
ID = 12
Don't you dare say anything, idiot!
UNFRIENDLY
Ya think you're smart? Well I tell you what! If you like my meals so much, then you can be damn cheery about it, because from now on, you will eat the stuff <b>I</b> made every day. Or <i>Else<i>.
ID = 0
Okay, okay! I will!
ID = 12
Right you will.
NEUTRAL
So, ehm...
See ya.
ERASE CENTER
ID = 0
...
(This could be the best deal I've ever been intimidated into.)
Also! I feel kind of bad playing the big guy when I still haven't showed up with anything, so I'll put effort into smaller projects. Such as the Uchioniko Expansion! What do you think of this, Marrend? Your mallet or whatzit wacked it at me today:
STORY 16
CONDITION = 12 LOVE
CONDITION = 5 DONE
PLACE = Courtyard
ID = 12
Yo, <player>.
SHOW CENTER
ID = 0
Hi yourself. Looking for me?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
You wish, you per-
NEUTRAL
:sigh: Sorry, reflex. I am. <b>This</b> time.
ID = 0
That's a pleasant suprise.
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
Savor it. Ya gonna be like that, it won't happen again.
ID = 0
Heh, okay. What would you like?
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
To give you this.
ID = 0
(Mayu hands me what looks like... a lunchbox?!)
You're giving me lunch?!
(This is just about the last thing I'd expect from Mayu. Or anyone.)
ID = 12
Well, duh. You're my partner. I gotta keep you in shape if we want to win matches.
And I bet you punk don't pay attention to your diet. This might taste worse than the crap your throat usually has to put up with, but it's good for you.
ID = 0
(I wonder if this really is her reason...)
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
So? Will you take the damn thing or should I stand here and wait for your excellency?
ID = 0
Uh, right!
(Calm down, <player>. Just be thankful nobody's staring at the two of you yet.)
(I take the box from her and open it. It feels warm in my hand. I can't tell kind of food's in it, but it smells nice.)
But... You could have just given me a recipe or something. Why cook for me?
...
ID = 0
...
ID = 12
LOVE
Ehm...
NEUTRAL
'Cuz.
ID = 0
'Cuz why?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
'Cuz 'If you won't shut up and try it I'll shove it down yer big mouth and pull it out of your ass'!
UNFRIENDLY
ID = 0
Fine, fine.
(I take a bite. It seems like some sort of mea-)
MUSIC = none
(... This. This food.)
ID = 12
What? What the hell is with that stupid face of yours? It looks more retarded than usual.
NEUTRAL
ID = 0
MUSIC = happy
...This... This stuff is fantastic! When did you learn to cook so well?
ID = 12
You mess with me? I'm the worst this side of Osaka!
ID = 0
No, I mean it! I wish my Mom cooked food half this tasty!
(I talk with my mouth half full. Not that I can help it. I can't have enough of Mayu's masterpiece.)
ID = 12
LOVE
Um, well, I, I'm really bad at it most of the time, but I, uhh, have a thing for, hrm, well, the hot stuff.
ID = 0
The hot stuff?
ID = 12
Yeah, the hot stuff. Like, hot dishes. You've got to use fire and everything. That might be why this turned out good.
# References!
If, if it is, I mean. It really is?
ID = 0
It really is.
ID = 12
Nah, you're just pulling one over me! Bet even you could do better with your eyes closed.
ID = 0
Me? As if! I would't be able to prepare anything short of a sandwich to save my life.
ID = 12
Then...
# This would be the part where the girl offers the boy to cook for him every day, but since Mayu realizes that she's... khm... Mayu, and who's she talking to, she twists it a wee bit.
NEUTRAL
...
ID = 0
What is it?
ID = 12
...
DISLIKE
MUSIC = Uchioniko/sots-mio.mp3
If you can't cook, then the hell should I hand out recipes to you, you moron?!
ID = 0
Wh-
ID = 12
Don't you dare say anything, idiot!
UNFRIENDLY
Ya think you're smart? Well I tell you what! If you like my meals so much, then you can be damn cheery about it, because from now on, you will eat the stuff <b>I</b> made every day. Or <i>Else<i>.
ID = 0
Okay, okay! I will!
ID = 12
Right you will.
NEUTRAL
So, ehm...
See ya.
ERASE CENTER
ID = 0
...
(This could be the best deal I've ever been intimidated into.)
triad2
0
cool can't wait for any and all critisms and if anyone needs some extra tachie for yoko let me know i will work on it when i can well i am off to work
@triad:
I suppose I could upload that file I was looking at myself? Seems like a waste of locker space to do that, but if it would really help, then, I suppose I could go that extra mile.
@Dozen:
That's "Bludgeon of Inspiration". Anyway, the usual line for Mayu offering some of her baking is "God, I suck at cooking!" Her skill in cooking is not defined beyond that, so I'm not sure how plausible this event actually is. Outside of that technicality, I really like this. What I like about it the most is the reference to hot foods, and fire. It feels like the kind of reference I might make myself. How the story concludes with Mayu "saving face" in light of her true feelings is also something I admire with this story.
I suppose I could upload that file I was looking at myself? Seems like a waste of locker space to do that, but if it would really help, then, I suppose I could go that extra mile.
@Dozen:
That's "Bludgeon of Inspiration". Anyway, the usual line for Mayu offering some of her baking is "God, I suck at cooking!" Her skill in cooking is not defined beyond that, so I'm not sure how plausible this event actually is. Outside of that technicality, I really like this. What I like about it the most is the reference to hot foods, and fire. It feels like the kind of reference I might make myself. How the story concludes with Mayu "saving face" in light of her true feelings is also something I admire with this story.
Dozen
697
author=Marrend
the usual line for Mayu offering some of her baking is "God, I suck at cooking!" Her skill in cooking is not defined beyond that, so I'm not sure how plausible this event actually is.
Yeah, I guessed that could be confusing. I tried to make clear she only did good this one time because it was a 'hot dish'.
author=MarrendThis... makes me feel all fuzzy inside :) Thank you.
I really like this. What I like about it the most is the reference to hot foods, and fire. It feels like the kind of reference I might make myself. How the story concludes with Mayu "saving face" in light of her true feelings is also something I admire with this story.
I've done a few fixes to it - I think it's ready for implementation. Off for the next one!
triad2
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sorry marrend but i don't know when i will have time off again during the day atleast not for 2 weeks so it might be better to find another way or to experiment yourself
@Marrend
I guess it's probably just the computer I'm using at the moment not recognizing image files.
@triad2, Dozen
If you like, we can put that link to Yoko's tachie pack at the top of the page.
I'll be honest, though. Her forehead bugs me. Her bangs would look better to me if lowered a bit, and even a chimera should have eyebrows, yeah?
I guess it's probably just the computer I'm using at the moment not recognizing image files.
@triad2, Dozen
If you like, we can put that link to Yoko's tachie pack at the top of the page.
I'll be honest, though. Her forehead bugs me. Her bangs would look better to me if lowered a bit, and even a chimera should have eyebrows, yeah?
