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Silver Night's Crusaders
Action Platformer set in an obscure medieval age (or another Castlevania fangame, obviously xd).

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Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=Marrend
@Crimsondeath: Hrm. Maybe something like...
...this?


Wow thanks :D, they're not the exact words but I think the descripcion reads better I'm going to post it in the official website of the game too, the problem is that has very few space for text because of the font style (the font is Press start, an Arcade font), so I have do some changes to make it fits in my site:

The year is 2044. After the events of World War III, the United States and European Union are no more, so utterly devastated they were by the nuclear fallout. The power vacuum in Northern America gave rise to the "Pacific Union", with Neopolis as it's capital in South America.

While the world is now at peace, the Neopolis police is busy fightning the crime in Neopolis, which is getting more violent by the day.

They send a special agent, Isolda Shinwara, to investigate those cases finding traces of Drako, a drug that makes a person stronger and aggressive. As follows the case, she will find it leads to a much more dangerous, and corrupt, path that was originally thought...


Just tell me if it's right or not, anyways I could use your version to post the game in the forum, thanks again :D .

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Hi, I'm new here and my game was denied for the description too, I'm a spanish native, I can understand english but haven't use it for a long time x.x (I hope can practice receiving feed back from all of you hehe), here is my game description:

Game Description : - Neon Lightning Force -
Is the year 2044, after the third world war, the countries of the north have been devastated by they powerful nuclear arsenal. United states and the European Union no longer exist, giving born a new association of countries the Pacific Union and Neopolis as the main capital in South America.

In an apparent peaceful world, the neopolis police was concerned to fight the crime of they streets, which by unknown causes becomes more and more violent.

Isolda shinawara is a special agent who investigates this case finding the drako a drug that makes the criminals more skilful, strong and aggressive, what she does not imagine is that to follow the track of this case will lead to a much more dangerous and corrupt path that it seems...

Spanish description here:
Año 2044, tras la tercera guerra mundial los países del norte han quedado devastados por su potente arsenal nuclear. estados unidos y la unión europea no existen más cediendo ante una nueva potencia la unión del pacífico y su capital neópolis en sudamérica.

Ante la aparente paz mundial, la policía de neópolis se ocupa de combatir la delincuencia de sus calles, que por causas desconocidas se hace cada día más violenta.

Isolda Shinawara es una agente especial que investiga este caso hallando al drako una droga que hace a los criminales más hábiles, fuertes y agresivos, lo que no imagina es que seguir la pista de este caso la conducirá a un sendero mucho más peligroso y corrupto de lo que parece...


Thanks :)
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