SHORTSTAR'S PROFILE

I hear that story is a must have with a RPG. Story is not my strength, but here is what I have come up with. There are 5 areas for chapter 1. Here are the bullet points, so there's not much reading. I try to make questions and unsolved issues that will roll into future chapters.

CHAPTER 1
- You wake up alone at an inn with 2 beds.
- There is a letter on the second bed.
- The letter smells of perfume and tells you to show up at a cabin at midnight. Come alone and make sure you're not followed.

- You show up alone (leaving your party behind). The cabin is empty.
- Accomplish a puzzle.
- A woman enters and falsely recognizes you.
- She wrote the letter yes, but you weren't the one that was supposed to receive it.
- Mercenaries enter the cabin.
- The girl has been hiding from their wizard lord. She stole a crystal.
- She doesn't have it on her
- Running away spares your lives.
- She threw it in a dangerous swamp for safe keeping.
- She joins you to get the crystal (or not, that's the beauty of the game, you can get it without her)

- Either gather your party or rejoin your party or go alone (depending on how you play the game)
- Visiting the swamp reveals that the crystal was discovered by a local.
- A swamp diving old miser found it and it's his now. He doesn't realize its power.
- Do what it takes to get the crystal back. Bargaining, killing, stealing (branches appropriately placed).
- After you exit with the crystal, the mercenaries are there and after a fight, they take the crystal for their boss.

- At a nearby village, you find out where the wizard's lair is.
- Visit the lair and as per usual have a fight first against the mercenaries.
- The wizard is the king's personal assistant. He has a master plan.
- Then fight against the wizard.
- Once the wizard loses round 1, he caps off the round by using the crystal to magically transport you to another land.
- He would kill you, but he refrains from doing so for a specific reason.
- Chapter 2 stars, I will need to think up more for 20 areas.

Any thoughts on the bullet points?

Commercial = paid for graphics

Huh?

... ummm and I thought I clicked the Testers only checkbox but there's the download.

This upload was only meant for one person.

They're VX RTP.

Edit: It says 0 downloads. How did you play the game when no one downloaded it?

What do you mean by poorly articulated concepts? Perhaps you should articulate more :-)

They are clearly not RTP. They look great though.