SUPER_STUNNER'S PROFILE

Ah ok in that case I cannot refuse, however I first want to release the next version before it get's lt'd. There are some important improvements and toned down vulgarity and a lot more.

author=Dyhalto
I recognize that slime x)

Could be I got it from charas if I'm not mistaken.

author=Benjami33
you just have to think for a litle while

How are you progressing right now? Part 2 comes out within 2 weeks ;).

author=Crystalgate

author=Strangeluv

author=Super_stunner
Well it's not that the game get's better after 20 hours. It's just that the story has so many plot twists that you never know what's really going on.

Do you think this was a good design decision

It is a good design if done right. There are a lot of (presumable interesting) things going on in the background that the player will (presumable) get to later. That way the player has a lot to lock forward to. However, this setup must be handled with great care.

Whatever the player is doing right now has to be interesting as well, you should not just promise things will get fun in the future while the player is shoveling dirt. If things are boring right now, how will the player be able to trust that things really will become fun later? Judging from the comments I've read, this isn't the case with this game. It has you do uninteresting stuff for the first 20 hours after which things maybe gets better.

You will also need a good phasing of the player getting involved with the grander scheme and gradually getting to know more. The player has to feel that she/he is actually making a progress. Even if it's unclear what the goal is, there are still ways to give the player a sense of progress.

Anyway, this can be a good design if your writing skill is up to the task. For most people however, I would not recommend trying to set up the story this way.

Very true what you're telling here. Though some people are really sucked in the story (even in the beginning) I'm still thinking how I can make it more interesting. I added some extra events in the new version but that's just silence before the storm.

author=kentona

author=Magi
Regardless of the ire this game has accumulated, the fact that it has 4500 downloads means it's doing something right. You could really debate all day over why you think this game is/isn't good, but maybe the better thing to ask is what qualities in it have convinced so many people to download it?

I am always curious as to where else people advertise their games. I've never really stumbled into that magical zone on the internets where RPG games are worshipped by masses of people, sending download counts into the stratosphere.

A few games/makers have seemed to have found that.

I want in.

I post my game on a lot of forums that I'm member of. Soon I will post it on more websites but before I do that I want improve the game some more on some critics that were given here.

Wow this looks very good! Going to download it for sure!

Edit: I don't hear sound effects is this intentional?