SVIEL'S PROFILE

I can't take this on right now, but perhaps later on...I'll just sub to the thread and see if my schedule clears up.

ALSO where is the 'T' in 'Violent?'

If your story would not have made sense had the plot twist not happened, it's probably not a good twist. In such cases, the twist can be used to explain things or spice things up, but if it was never revealed, the experiences of the characters still would have been believable.

Secondly, the twist should not invalidate the preceding material, only show it in a new light. Nothing is more frustrating than being told that all that stuff you cared about earlier was actually worthless...but being told that perhaps your tears were being jerked by an undeserving fellow, that re-ignites the emotion with a new direction.

I would say they aren't absolutely necessary, though. Just, really easy to do and people don't usually get mad about them since they're so run-off-the-mill. If you're aiming for average, a plot-twist is a great way to get there.

This sounds like a job for Yanfly's Gab Window, so you could have them heckling without interrupting the flow of the game.

author=McBick
The purpose of the system is to make the player feel like he/she doesn't have control over how well battles go.This will discourage players from just spamming enter to attack. Unfortunately as of now all you do is attack, heal, or use spells, but I want to add more to the system, so that battles have more factors/randomness.

That's going to discourage players from playing at all.

In a tabletop game, there's generally a whole lot more going on, and you have friends there to laugh away frustration if you get screwed by the dice.

In an RPG, even if the battles take the same amount of time, the battle in which you miss 50% of your attacks feels worse than the battle in which you land most of them. If we consider skills, a high miss rate prohibits strategy as you can't be reasonably certain that your skill will land in time.

Basically, you may be succeeding in emulating that one factor of tabletops, but it is only going to hurt you here. The only thing you can claim in the end is that you brought everyone's least favorite element of tabletops (angry dice gods) into RPGs.

Give to me your game that I may review it~