FREYKIN'S PROFILE

I've been an avid gamer for many years, and finally have decided to try my hand at creating something to give back to my favorite hobby. I tend to like RPGs of all sorts, be it console, western, JRPG, tabletop, serious, silly, etc.

I hope that if you give any of my creations a try, that they end up being as fun for you to play as it was for me to make them :)

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Ah, I only had one get petrified at a time, I can see how both getting petrified and it lasting 3 turns could be pretty brutal. Does it break upon being struck? That might be a good way to balance it out.

The Four Spirits

Ah, yes, it is possible to save her before being asked to do so, but it doesn't break any switches or anything. I figured since you can easily wander to the tower first, I might as well leave it open to entry right off, in case someone found it and wants to just dungeon crawl from the get go.

I tried a bunch of different things on that tower and they all looked wrong, it never turned out quite how I wanted it to :/.

The later maps (especially after you recruit Skaldi) are pretty sparse on details, mainly because last night was the last chance I had to work on this, and wanted to try and have a completed story instead of one halfway done. To me that would be a bigger accomplishment, and if there aren't any game destroying bugs, then I've succeeded :). It may not be the greatest game, but it's a game, and I've learned so much in this past week from it all.

Lucidity: False

Ah, that makes sense! It was definitely a different font than the one in that screen shot.

Lucidity: False

Hey there, downloaded this and gave it a try, and wanted to say good job! It's well put together, I really enjoyed the dialogue between the characters. However, I did come across some bugs, which I will put underneath a hide thing here, since they potentially contain some spoilers:

intro text Am I dreaming shifted too far to
the right, cutting off the ?

We'll get to them eventually same problem

tell me about yourself same problem

rabbit text in intro, "i cant remember anything either" second line goes off screen.

rabbit intro text fantastic, goes off screen a couple times.

in a tutorial battle, cheshire has rabbit's face in dialogue

possible typo in dialogue for hatter at beginning of level 2, saying remember your conselling, possibly meaning counseling?

rabbits text beginning level 2 goes off screen again.

hatters text right after goes off.

in front of three chairs, snowy precipice,
hatters text goes over.

dream core level 2, hatters text goes over.
same with rabbits.

level 3, at rabbits grave, several text boxes go over.

level 3 dream core, hatters text goes over.

level 4 beginning, hatter and rabbit text goes over.

level 4 dream core, rabbits text goes over, along with hatters.

level 5 town dialogue, all 3 have text going over.

level 6 dream core dialogue, goes over a bit.

after waking up, Lex's dialogue goes over, along with blanks.

in the room you wake up in, you can move one square too far up into the bookcase.

in the skill rotation part of the menu, blank has no graphic. sasme goes for equipment.

in the castle hallway, both lex and blank have dialogue that goes over, and there are some spacing issues in blank's dialogue.

While talking to Alice, Blank's dialogue goes over. So do several of Alice's lines.

Game complete!

Congratulations! I'm going to be going into overdrive tomorrow (working alllllll day) on mine, hopefully will get it done or close to it, as I won't have much time on Saturday to finalize things.

Wish me luck!

For #1, unless they've been changed from the demo version I played, I felt their difficulty was spot on. If you spam the high powered attacks they drop fast, otherwise, it takes a while. It gives you the feel of starting off epic and fighting crazy stuff right off.

For #2, I didn't notice it one way or the other on my end, it seemed pretty equally distributed.

For #3, once he started healing, I figured the fight was going to go to something scripted, as it would be impossible for either of us to defeat each other with the damage numbers going around.

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Yeah, I didn't realize that until I had finished mapping this entire dungeon out with them ><. It's on my list of things to go back and fix if I have time before the contest ends, especially reworking the first floor to flow better.

The Four Spirits

While this is my first time developing, I've spent many, many years in Q&A/beta testing, so I completely understand just how important feedback can be :). Especially when it was provided in such a thoughtful, well written post specifying exact issues and potential fixes to them.

Thanks for the subscribe!

Nope

Good luck to us both on making it in time :) We can do it!

Uchioniko

Hey there, just gave your demo a playthrough, and I really liked what I saw :). you've got the magical girl genre down perfectly, and I especially liked the encounter with the ruffians. I did come across one typo, however. It was in classroom 1-A, the blonde haired kid on the left says competion instead of competition.

Looking forward to seeing more of this! :)