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Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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I would highly recommend finishing a character, triad. Because, sometimes, completing a task is a task onto itself.
so yoko or maeda then because as far as i'm concerned unless theres a complaint about seira she's finnished though i was thinking about adding a scene where masako walks by them and says something about how the badgers in the area are a little too violent and that the player should stay away from them though maeda will never be finnished
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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If Masako has a cameo appearance in Seira's story, I sincerely doubt she would go along with the badger story. Heck, she would probably suspect the truth, and confront the player about why he is willing to take the abuse. I'm seeing it kind of like this:


STORY X
CONDITION = 2 DONE OR 4 DONE
PLACE = Sick Room
ID = 10
SHOW CENTER
Greetings. Oh, you are injured.
UNFRIENDLY
This injury... this is not the first time this has happened, has it?
NEUTRAL
What has transpired that caused such an injury?
ID = 0
Another blasted badger attack!
ID = 10
A badger attack, you say?
UNFRIENDLY
Those marks you bear seem too precise to be made by an animal. They seem more like wounds made with a blade, or other sharp object.
NEUTRAL
I also have my suspicions about who, or what, could have caused those wounds. The question I pose to you is this. Why do you allow it? You need not answer this question now, but it is an important one.
ERASE CENTER
ID = 0
(That's <b>does</b> seem like a good question! Do I let Seira do what she wants because she's just too fast for me, or is it because I like it when she does that?)


That's just how I imagine the scene working. You can use that if you wish. Or, you can customize that more to your own style of writing.
i figured the badger story thing would be early on in both routes so it would be like her basically saying i know what is really going on but it isnt any of my business for now


Edit it would appear before the new uniform of course if i do it ill have you look at it first
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
If you want me to look at the story where Masako shows up, even if it is only to give advise on how she should talk, I can do that. One piece of advise I can give right now is that Masako knows what people are thinking. Sometimes even before they think it!
author=Nekochi
By the way Dozen, do you still want me to look at Kyouki? If you do, can you please send me the files? I'd love to look at them now that I have time to do so.


I know I promised, but now I'm the one who ain't got time for no thing. Sorry Nekochi, I hope we'll get to it eventually.

You must really be busy if you don't even have time to upload it. ;) That's okay, I'll be patient, I just can't promise I won't be busier than I am now by the time you get around to uploading it.
nekochi if you have time would you mind giving a look over on seira?
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
I've been working fairly steadily on Fran lately. However, that could be changing very soon. So, I was thinking, what better way to mark what I've done thus far than a re-release?
No problem, Triad! Have you already uploaded the file somewhere? Just give me a link and I'll look into it. :)
here she is nekochi
author=triad2
here is 3 posts real quick first is seira the mayadere mostly tested meaning i played through and got about 75 of her story
DISCLAIMER:
She is a mayadere which means she is actively trying to kill you, and even her dere side is more tsun then dere. So if you do not want to watch the player get painful assassinated do not play. also there is strong language though I did try to stay away from the f bomb, oh and there are a few places where she wears a bikini. To recap VIOLENCE STRONG LANGUAGE and BIKINI. she needs v 2.2 and it doesent matter if you play with clean mode on or off but off gives you a chance to get a few extra stories.
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
ive decided i want to give yoko a proper story one befitting her uniqueness and while doing so i will also be adding a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT more content for maeda including but not limited to an expanded role for genji sorry dozen if this affects any work you have done on her. and marrend i would really like your help on yoko because she will be the anti masako (she is after all modeled after a certain batman villian if you couldnt guess)
Ugh... It's fine. I'm a sucker for new content, what can I say. I'll spellcheck the new version as well.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
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author=triad2
marrend i would really like your help on yoko because she will be the anti masako (she is after all modeled after a certain batman villian if you couldnt guess)


So, you're getting inspiration from Harley Quinn. Interesting!

If you, or anyone else, have any questions about my characters, you are free to PM me. Especially if you want to avoid spoiling anything! If you are unafraid of spoilers, post a question here!
i'm just debating whether to scrap what i got so far or amend it so they aren't fighting it might be easier to scrap all but the first official meeting and start over(again i was in a lot of physical pain while i was writing her and that is how seira was born.)


and kudos to marrend for recognizing the influence.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
I'm not sure why I didn't come up with Two-Face first. If Yoko is the chimera, as I assumed, then Two-Face might make a bit more sense as a first guess. It might be because I know somebody who's playing Batman - Arkham Asylum, and Harley was more at the forefront of my mind because of it. Strange.

Anyway, I'm not sure about re-writing the introduction so that Masako and Yoko (I presume) are not fighting. It depends on how the sequence is written. If it's like, Yoko assaults Masako out of the blue, well, there's only so much one can do, yeah? If Yoko goes up to her, and starts making threats, I would think Masako would get her diplomacy on.
no yoko is more or less harmless i wanted her to drag the player along on all kinds of mischief but after the first sequence yoko and the player started fighting more and more its hard to right cheerful dialog with a messed up tendon
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21781
author=triad2
no yoko is more or less harmless


She's harmless, until she makes you armless!

author=triad2
i wanted her to drag the player along on all kinds of mischief but after the first sequence yoko and the player started fighting more and more its hard to right cheerful dialog with a messed up tendon


Fair enough, I suppose.
Just cut Ryoko's theme out of MusMus' 14th piece(incidentally, that's my sister's lucky number. Maybe I'll base some stuff on her?). Not that I'm proud of my skill of using freeware software; I uploaded it so everybody knows what lost it's vacant status.

Now, back to work, me!
The talk about Shoko the other day reminded me of the fact we lack CGs. And then I thought, 'Fuck that! It's not like I can't draw!'(with the same format and everything).

So there you have it, a rough sketch of Ryoko, in all her menacing glory, leaning to the tree at the backyard.


Evil!

I wanted to ask your opinion before I got into the details, like fixes, deciding which eyebrow to go with(I'm torn!), a more detailed eye, colors, shading, etc. What do you think? Good enough?