EBETH'S PROFILE

Ebeth
always up for cute art and spicy gay romance
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I'm E(liza)beth and I like pancakes, sleeping and making games. I like cute stuff & trying out new things! My favorite games are Ace Attorney, Hyper Light Drifter, Dishonored & Yume Nikki.

I'm a game designer & artist (pixel & 3D). I'm also trying to get better at programming in C#. I've worked with/work in Rpg maker 2k3 & Ace, Bitsy, Twine, Unreal & Unity.

Sometimes I write articles/tutorials & make resources.

Certified Mafia Junkie

I'm also on Itchio!
https://ebeth.itch.io/

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Luna and the Stars

author=unity
Love how cute this is! Also, as someone who is just learning how to use the Unity engine, this is some neat stuff you were able to implement! :D


Ah thank you! Also it makes me happy that unity is learning Unity!

Luna and the Stars Review

Thank you for playing and reviewing Piano! I think my art being described as whimsical is one of my favorite compliments I've ever gotten.

Luna and the Stars Review


Alright! Thank you for the clarification!

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Updated the pic with current progress! Put more time into and I'm much happier with it overall now.

author=Altered
put some ZZZ's on the side?

author=Cap_H
Add pillows

I made the lid transparent so you can see the pillows and blanket inside! It helped a lot.


author=Kylaila
Never had the standard procedure in the traditional way. SAFE!
But also no big pixeling progress : D

Very nice! I also really like the perspective. You can really see the progress

Haha! Thank you! The perspective was weird to get down but I like how it turned out.

Luna and the Stars Review

Hey thanks for taking the time to play and write a review! I'm glad you liked the art and that the sound design fit well.

My only concern is I really hope that you didn't feel duped out of the amount of content? I was hoping the description made it clear that this game is really short and simple and to not expect too much out of it?

I understand the rating based on the lack of content- its a VERY small game. LATS was used more as a test run for Unity and more complex pixel art than what I had been previously created so I wasn't going for anything too complex here. (It's also unlikely that I'll ever go back and expand it.) However I though I had made it clear from the start that this game was a short game so it seems a bit redundant to dock so many points off the score for getting exactly what it says on the tin. I would have preferred if points had been docked for something like feeling Luna's walking speed was too slow or that the rate at which the fireballs fell was too fast.

I worry that you (and others) went in expecting a little more and I'd like to do whatever I can to change that expectation so players don't feel too let down.

I hope that makes sense and doesn't sound like I'm trying to argue with you or anything!

Maps Weekly 2: The Mappening

Alright- as promised here's my feedback for every entry for the first week!



@kory_tombs I like the gardens behind the houses & the worn down dirt paths! It makes it feel very lived in. My suggestions for improvement would to be have stuff that's going off the map. Right now everything is rather centered in the middle of the map which feels less natural. I would also move the second house up one tile, it feels a little cramped behind the other one right now.


@momeka Love the colors! The art style is very nice too. I only wish there were a couple more objects besides the skull outside the houses.


@altred I like the two distinct levels of the town and the way you handled all the foliage. All that nature looks great! I'd maybe move the tent away from the rest of the village, I think it'd look more interesting if it was more mysterious and secluded. Other than that I'd add more non nature tiles around the village- it feels a bit bare right now.


@everguard Love the fall colors and amount of detail! One logistic thing bugging me- how does that dude get out of his house to his backyard without going all the way around? That seems mighty inconvenient! Also how'd you harvest those pumpkins up on that ledge?


@Cap_H I love it! Very cute & nice relaxing colors- they're bright without being too over-saturated. I especially like the shape the river makes- it helps to break up the map a lot and creates a nice focal point for that tower.


@Make_it_Magik So lovely- it makes me wish it was a real place I could visit! I like the earthy colors, and the curved path through the town. Between the curved layout, the amount of details and the fact that part of the town is off the map it really feels believable.


@seiginohero I like all the lights on the trees! It makes it feel very welcoming. I would add more details to what you have on the map right now as it feels pretty empty. I'd also edit or nix those signs on the building, they feel wildly out of place with everything else and are bringing the whole map down with them.


@Luiishu535 I really like those tiles and the limited color pallet! I would move the old dead tree on the left down a little as it seems to be blending in to the trees behind it. Other than that it feels a little too symmetrical but that could just be a personal preference of mine.


@LockeZ Those fixes definitely helped a lot! I like the dock and the tiny boat. I'd maybe condense the town a little more- I feel like bringing the sides in together might result in a better flow. I'd also maybe darken the color of the tiles that make up the plaza and such. If they were browner I think they'd harmonize better with the other tiles.



Alright- whew. Thanks everyone for the awesome maps!

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author=Cap_H
What a twist! I'm shocked.


I honestly can't tell if this is sarcasm or not ahaha. Either way Soleil is an 90's anime villain in the making.

Maps Weekly 2: The Mappening



Sorry guys for missing the deadline and what was apparently a bum prompt :( Though if you made one I'd love to see it!

WEEK THREE PROMPT

The prompt this week is modern/city.

Now go make some maps & post them on here by next Tuesday! New prompt will still be on Sunday!

[CANCELLED] Madoka Mafika was murdered by Kloebey

If we're reviving this I want in!

Mafia Guide; Hosting, Suggestions, and Discussion

author=CAVE_DOG_IS_BACK
start the GAME


GAME! GAME! GAME!