MORTETORMENT'S PROFILE

Ok, decided to play it.

This feels like the kind of full fledged game that someone who is passionate about game creation makes to seek out constructive criticism, so I'm here to give you two pointers on my two main issues.

Random battles towards the end of the game take way too long(up to 8 turns sometimes), and that made the game start to drag. Not sure what advice to give you on this, other than to try to make the experience less monotonous.

The dialogue wasn't bad enough to make me quit, but it that it kept me from caring all that much about any of the characters. Essentially, you need to work on structuring your sentences.

Alright out of the way, I will leave you with an honest compliment.
I ended playing this because you were completely honest about this being your first game, and you didn't pretend that it was anything special. The last game that I played was this game called Kukenstra: The Megalomanical Monasteries, which boasted a lot of features(all of which were bland at best) and featured dialogue which made the characters feel like robot aliens pretending to be real people. That game made me not want to play any other RM titles for months, this one makes me want to play more.

Anyways, I wish you well, and I hope that you continue making more games. Just try to consider your mistakes as you go along and act accordingly, and you could end up making something great.

If you do, please send me a private message or whatever.

I set up a system for how I choose to play games here, and I wanted some opinions on it. I was also wondering if anyone has either a system like this, or any system at all for how you do things.

Essentially, I filtered things so I only see completed games, with an average review score of 2 stars or more, and a download available. and I sorted game by the date added in reverse order.

From here, I read through every review and description of the first 8 pages of games, and made a list of the ones that seemed promising.

I listed each game under a category of writing, gameplay, or bizarre, as well as list a logical estimate for how long the game will take on average.

While I'm not perfect at keeping with this system, It's helped keep me a lot more focused, and cut down a lot on me simply looking around trying to decide what to play here

So again, what do you think of the system? Any suggestions for how to improve it? And do you have a system yourself?

Oh, and if anyone would like to see my notepad file, let me know and I'll put the text on pastebin.

Thank you for your time.

If you were to make a logical estimate, how many hours will it take to complete this?

This review doesn't really tell me anything about the game itself besides its visuals, and essentially I could write up the exact same review just by looking at screenshots, and reading the description on the website.

I'm not saying that you did that, as I have no idea, plain and simple. But I have learned nothing about this game from your review because you essentially just make a bunch of blanket statements.

I could also point out how bizarre it is that you rank most of your categories so high, yet you make those features in this game sound boring btw.

If you want to make a better reviews, consider what you want to tell your readers about the game. And at the very least. give us a plot synopsis (that mentions things besides what is written in the official summary.), and maybe offer suggestions towards how he could make it more interesting. Maybe talk about the battle system in a way that someone that doesn't care all that much about how RPGMaker titles are made. This is someones first project. so maybe he's either done something good or bad that you don't usually see from titles like these.

What I got from the title is that this is intentionally generic.

My question is, is this a parody then?

Also, can you give me a logical estimate on how long this will take to complete(IE: Numbers of hours.), and how much grinding will be required?