SHOOBINATOR'S PROFILE

Oh, but if I may ask, what are some instances of ceiling tiles used inconsistently? I could think of a few spots where you might think this, but in a couple I was trying to go for the ceiling/wall having collapsed and another where the ceiling is low but the the wall is "cut-away" to view Geoffroy floating all the way to the edge of the screen. If this is considered "bad", how might I go about doing this with better practice? I'll post some pics real quick of what exactly I'm referring to.

EDIT:

This one is the main temple room. I'm referring to the left side of the map, where the ceiling touches the water.

old_temple_main.png

I'm referring to the "broken out" ceiling at the top. Don't mind the floor tiles as I'll soon be fixing those.

old_sanctuary.png

Are shots of whole maps allowed or do they have to be from in-game?

Do you think I should try adding more screenshots and then resubmitting? Or just PM the admin at this point?

Sorry if I sounded like I was rejecting criticism, but I wanted to explain my thought process behind my work.

@LockeZ, Again, thanks for the help! To address a few things...

• There is actually supposed to be a river unseen above ground as will be explained/shown later. Perhaps, it wasn't clear enough with the top-down view, but the main room of the temple is supposed to be somewhat underground. This explains the waterfalls.

• I actually know how to use the shift key and deliberately didn't use it in certain spots when making this, but you raise a good point about the lighter stone in the area with the ring on the pedestal. (are we both referring to the same spot?) I guess that could be explained by parts of the wall and roof having collapsed from age, so there's different colored stone on the floor. That's what I was going for on that map.

• If this was a larger dungeon, I would have made more rooms. But it's just a shorter introduction/prologue dungeon.

• The grass in the temple is there to show how it is so old that it's been overrun with vegetation and also to show the creators' respect for the environment.

• Also, there will be more to follow than just the writing in the grass! :)

Hopefully, that clears up a few things :)