SHORTSTAR'S PROFILE

- The flash to kick off the game was weird.
- Skipping the intro is a little weird to ask. Why not just push a button to skip it?
- Mode 7 would really help with the initial fly over.
- The clouds really need to move. Try some fog scripts.
- You need some text durring the fly over... like mapped by... scripts by....
- Future Helper isn't a good name or maybe that's your point. Try Mark and the Seven Towers or Seven Sinly Towers
- See if you can't get some pics for chapter scenes to make it feel more like a chapter is beginning and not just ordinary text.
- Spaces and capitolization are a must! Unless English is your second language you shouldn't be this bad :-)
- You need interactivity. Look at the picture... no time to go to sleep now. What are in the books? What is the computer used for?. Interactivity!!!!
- Your waterfalls need events that look like a water splashdown.
- Having your mom turn to you while she's still talking to herself shouldn't happen. She should stand still and not notice you... then when she notices you have her turn.
- Courtyard needs flowers or something and interactivity. Butterflies or something.
- i needs to be capitolized.
- wtf is with the N-Pad. I don't get it. Was this explained and I missed it?
- Windows on houses are way too high up. Maybe go with the windows that are 2 tiles tall and centered.
- You need more plant life. Trees, bushes, flower and stuff.
- A sign that says nothing.
- Cut off top to your lights.
- It feels very wrong having real phone numbers in the game... maybe instead have 4 digit phone numbers?
- You should have something remember numbers in the game for the player. Like a common event.
- Marketplace feels very empty and box-ish. You need clutter. Boxes, people moving.
- Buildings feel empty and naked inside.
- Crazy LOL music sometimes with the newspaper and the N-Pad thing.
- Fancy meeting you here? ... shouldn't it be welcome Sire... or you're late.
- Such pleasant town music after something spastic happens.
- Oh snap there's an organization called future helper? Uggg...
- It is very tough reading the text at the top of the battle screen. Make that black bar much darker please.
- Nice use of text sizes.
- The N-Pad music is very jarring... It should probably just be whatever music the map had if not more sedate music.

I think kickstarter people are the perfect marks, because they're blissfully unaware that there are thousands of free games using the same engine.

I've been scripting a custom menu. I have transparent .png files that I'd love to post over one another... like 2 lovers that come together. However, it seems like the graphical image boxes are boxes and even though the images have transparent it is as ive invisible boxes cover when they overlap.

My only thought of a solution is to make an image box within an image box.

Has anyone else dealt with this issue? I just don't want my menu to look so box-ish.

Screenshot looks good. House might need some more touches, because it looks like a box.

This looks fantastic and yes there are lines in the lower staircase.