ANEKO'S PROFILE

UUuhh I wanna be holding a rat and say something like "Yo, I'm Aiko nice to meet ya I've only been here for a bit but I love it Merry Christmas"

Soo i'm doing a game. A different one to help get more experience. You are always good at helping with maps though i feel like i have gotten a little better by just experimenting. Though I would still like honest opinions seeing as i am still a beginner.

Not sure about doors, the small ones look a little funny so should i go with the small ones?


Or the bigger ones??


Also is the room too cluttered, too small or too big

In the forest, there is a little town with a few villagers in it. Their main trades are hunting and fishing. Genta and his parents were three of these villagers. On a hunting excursion, a terrible accident occurred: Genta's parents died, and Genta himself was badly wounded. Luckily, they were near the town. The townsfolk could hear the screams, and came to rescue. Genta lost his memories that day. They say it was a combination of the trauma of loosing his parents and the trauma of his wounds.

When he recovered in vigor more fully, he decides to travel, maybe to recover some of those lost memories. Along the way, he finds friends with their own specialties. He also encounters an opponent; someone that will stop at nothing to keep Genta from his goal. Genta swears he saw this person once before. Was it during the hunting incident? Yes, the memory seems to surface. He was there, attacked them, and was ultimately responsible for his parent's death and his wounds. The question remains: why?

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"Description needs a little work when it comes to punctuation and sentence structure."

In the forest, there is a little town with only a few people in it, they get by with hunting and fishing. Genta and his parents lived there this is where some of his story begins. They were running low on resources so decided to head out into the forest but something bad happened that night. Genta and his parents were in a horrible accident when they went hunting in the woods. His parents, unfortunately, didn't make it and Genta barely made it if it weren't for some of the villagers hearing his screams from the town.

After losing his memories from head trauma/ trauma of losing his parents and just wanting to push it away and being haunted by dreams of what seems like the past he decided to head out and figure out what happened that day and regroup his memories of his life before the accident so he can't really remember who he was.

Genta isn't alone on this trip to get his memories back. He finds friends. that have specialties of their own, one who is really fast and the other has extreme strength. He also meets someone who is against him, doing anything in his power to keep him from getting what he wants.

any pointer??

*nod nod* I do want the player to be able to explore the town because that it a place they can learn about some of the game/plots. The dirt path is the way they can go in order to do that.