EDCHUY'S PROFILE

So, I see English's not you first language. Thus, I would suggest you get somebody whose a native speaker or who has actually studied in a school where that's the main language of instruction to help you check your spelling and grammar. Even doing a check using Word should help improve it a lot.

Here is my rewrite of your description:

author=tersnetwork
What if Goodness suddenly wasere Defeated?
and Evil Became StrongerOmnipresent and Omnipotent!
What canwould you do ?
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Dragon Quest - The Anti-Evil Cave, is A sub-part of the story of [u]dDai nNo dDaiboken. I'm talking about Adventures of Avan, in Manga. When aAvan deaied the Story begins. here you must be stronger to helprid the world from evil.

The other thing that stands out is that while you do give a basic background of the plot, you don't mention what elements it will have. You need to sell your game. I suggest reading the other posts in this topic or check the Descriptions of the most downloaded RMN games to get ideas of what you might want to include. For example, is it an RPG or Adventure? What of battle system do you intend to use? ...

If you need more help, post an updated description.

author=Dyhalto
Okay, I don't feel so old now :)

Good thing I've held up pretty well over time ... I haven't need to resort to Botox, just yet, thanks to good genetic makeup that makes people think I'm much younger than I really am. Probably, not doing things that age you quickly such as smoking, helped along the way. It was weird the first time ever I was called "Sir" and some people who are definitely younger than I am still refer to me as "youthful one".

Apparently, Dailymotion provides an alternative similar to how YT used to be. Feel free to further rant here:

Libby's YT/Google Hating Rant

Well, you have done a great job (yeah, also put lots of effort and time into it! ;D), and thus, shouldn't short-change your own efforts. I do look forward to you organizing another event in the future.

author=yuna21
@educhuy:You're old. :p

But young @ heart ... :D I'll give you a clue: I was a freshman in college during the holiday I played PS.